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Sonora Sunrise
It's the way she looks at midnight
not worrying about her hair
shines like stars above us
but she'll never disappear
she's wind and sun and water
a gift of hope to some
but what I see is beauty
in the music that she strums
it echoes in her spirit
her eyes light up and glow
a soft and soothing sparkle
one you never could let go
when the night gets longer
and our light begins to fade
we feed upon each other's bodies
in ev'ry bite new life is made
not worrying about her hair
shines like stars above us
but she'll never disappear
she's wind and sun and water
a gift of hope to some
but what I see is beauty
in the music that she strums
it echoes in her spirit
her eyes light up and glow
a soft and soothing sparkle
one you never could let go
when the night gets longer
and our light begins to fade
we feed upon each other's bodies
in ev'ry bite new life is made
Published 15th Oct 2019
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15th Oct 2019 10:32pm
Absolutely gorgeous Tim.
I would say that your words are magical.
They bring the sunrise to me every single day.
Losty
(:
I would say that your words are magical.
They bring the sunrise to me every single day.
Losty
(:
16th Oct 2019 6:06am
Well You & this special person can't be dark beings of the night
if You're rising with a Pleasant Sounding Sunrise
another stellar romantic spill, Brother
if You're rising with a Pleasant Sounding Sunrise
another stellar romantic spill, Brother
16th Oct 2019 6:14pm
16th Oct 2019 6:49pm
"she's wind and sun and water
a gift of hope to some"
This line has me thinking Tim. There are many that could use hope right about now. So many hurt around here lately. Beautiful, inspirational and touching ink, as always baby.
-Minx❣
a gift of hope to some"
This line has me thinking Tim. There are many that could use hope right about now. So many hurt around here lately. Beautiful, inspirational and touching ink, as always baby.
-Minx❣
16th Oct 2019 11:12pm
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18th Oct 2019 3:26pm
The rhythm in this is perfect and the imagery is intoxicating and beautiful, Tim. Gorgeous :-)
19th Oct 2019 9:08am
Woah wow what a brill stellar eulogy you wrote and the sensational saucy ending yayy. Kudos for this shining poem muse for her.
Pls pleez do comment/ write down your thoughts about and under my newest poem too. Without such thought exchange interaction we would be in monologue merely.
Pls pleez do comment/ write down your thoughts about and under my newest poem too. Without such thought exchange interaction we would be in monologue merely.
