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The Effort Facing The Blank
Thursday slow fades
scratching at blank,
way too many details
to collect
the vignettes
of passing observance
and keep on everyone's schedule
but my own
My faint whisper
soon to be a snore,
but there is always
that slim chance
that my dreams could
be laced with inspiration.
scratching at blank,
way too many details
to collect
the vignettes
of passing observance
and keep on everyone's schedule
but my own
My faint whisper
soon to be a snore,
but there is always
that slim chance
that my dreams could
be laced with inspiration.
Published 11th Oct 2019
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11th Oct 2019 4:20am
dearest Tender One I'm kind of feeling the same today
I wrote something but it wasn't what I wanted to write
I hate my feeling poems but my feelings had me cornered
they came hunting me on the blank page lol...
dream sexy dearest Tender One
Dear Mr. Fantasy play us a tune
la, la, la take us out of this gloom...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vxVlN-LzIks
love Brenda ❤
I wrote something but it wasn't what I wanted to write
I hate my feeling poems but my feelings had me cornered
they came hunting me on the blank page lol...
dream sexy dearest Tender One
Dear Mr. Fantasy play us a tune
la, la, la take us out of this gloom...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vxVlN-LzIks
love Brenda ❤
11th Oct 2019 4:34am
The intent was there, just couldn't seem to summon and with the limitations of time today...I guess the main thing is something got out.
It appears I'm not the only one and I appreciate you joining me in spirit on this write.
Funny, you should reference that song. I'm going to send you a different version of that from one of my fave Canadian bands. I don't have the capabilities to send it proper on this phone, but I will message it to you tomorrow. It doesn't divert much from the original, but would be curious to hear your take.
I'll reflect similar sentiments your way and hope the assist of a dream will get you to where you want to be.
It appears I'm not the only one and I appreciate you joining me in spirit on this write.
Funny, you should reference that song. I'm going to send you a different version of that from one of my fave Canadian bands. I don't have the capabilities to send it proper on this phone, but I will message it to you tomorrow. It doesn't divert much from the original, but would be curious to hear your take.
I'll reflect similar sentiments your way and hope the assist of a dream will get you to where you want to be.
11th Oct 2019 4:34am
The intent was there, just couldn't seem to summon and with the limitations of time today...I guess the main thing is something got out.
It appears I'm not the only one and I appreciate you joining me in spirit on this write.
Funny, you should reference that song. I'm going to send you a different version of that from one of my fave Canadian bands. I don't have the capabilities to send it proper on this phone, but I will message it to you tomorrow. It doesn't divert much from the original, but would be curious to hear your take.
I'll reflect similar sentiments your way and hope the assist of a dream will get you to where you want to be.
It appears I'm not the only one and I appreciate you joining me in spirit on this write.
Funny, you should reference that song. I'm going to send you a different version of that from one of my fave Canadian bands. I don't have the capabilities to send it proper on this phone, but I will message it to you tomorrow. It doesn't divert much from the original, but would be curious to hear your take.
I'll reflect similar sentiments your way and hope the assist of a dream will get you to where you want to be.
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11th Oct 2019 3:44pm
It happens to the best of us T!
You’re still a true born Canadian talent.
Never forget that.
Losty
(:
You’re still a true born Canadian talent.
Never forget that.
Losty
(:
11th Oct 2019 3:48pm
It's happening all around you, BUT youv'e always garnered an incredible output somehow..enough to make my every 7 to 10 day usual self jelly. 🙄
14th Oct 2019 4:22am
I tried to defy it by writing this. It seemed to keep it at bay. I fear it will come again, but I am trying to get it out before the dry spell. Remember, we are all in this together and often it can be others words that inspire me to continue.
14th Oct 2019 5:42am
That is very true. I added in days to the 7 to 10, but I guess you understood what I was referring to. You'll battle like a champ if so. Your brain fog doesn't appear to affect you as much as mine. Onwards and upwards !
14th Oct 2019 6:20pm
