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Whispers to Break Me
Nestled there
Forever in the darkness
Ripples words unfettered
Silence a gift for the lucky
A singularity of defiance
The inherent shadow of her soul
Haunts me so
A placebo of denial
Abashed I stand in rue
Awed in suffering
She begets my pity
Sweet nothings on her breath
She swallowed whole
All that I gave
Pills and fate
Lusty divinations
Wrapped in grace
She suffered there
A kiss for the putrid
And her corpse lies still
Forever in the darkness
Ripples words unfettered
Silence a gift for the lucky
A singularity of defiance
The inherent shadow of her soul
Haunts me so
A placebo of denial
Abashed I stand in rue
Awed in suffering
She begets my pity
Sweet nothings on her breath
She swallowed whole
All that I gave
Pills and fate
Lusty divinations
Wrapped in grace
She suffered there
A kiss for the putrid
And her corpse lies still
Published 5th Oct 2019
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24th Oct 2019 12:37pm
" Silence a gift for the lucky " <<<<<------ Curious......what did You mean by this (please) ?
because i read this as death
and since i deal with many loves who have died
and i deal with ideas of joining them daily
i just want to make certain i am reading Your spill correctly
because i read this as death
and since i deal with many loves who have died
and i deal with ideas of joining them daily
i just want to make certain i am reading Your spill correctly
24th Oct 2019 6:28pm
The silence of death...although I feel many poems are open for interpretation. I feel you have got what I intended out Tallen...
Anyways thanks for reading
Anyways thanks for reading
