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Repose
Beside one another we rest
A mass of limbs undressed
Slumber holds our bodies bound
In a haze of peace redressed
A mass of limbs undressed
Slumber holds our bodies bound
In a haze of peace redressed
Published 2nd Oct 2019
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5th Oct 2019 6:57am
Finality embosomed..quieting cries
Flesh fused releasing imprisoned sighs
cores kissing, waving distance goodbye
Poetry's intent whole by twine of thighs......
Flesh fused releasing imprisoned sighs
cores kissing, waving distance goodbye
Poetry's intent whole by twine of thighs......
There in lies a prize, amongst your eyes
An understanding bound, feeling found
Slipping between the hold of time and sound
We mark our page with a glance
Living life within a dance
An understanding bound, feeling found
Slipping between the hold of time and sound
We mark our page with a glance
Living life within a dance
7th Oct 2019 8:47am
The initial poem perfectly expresses not needing to say anything more at the end, but then, that, too, can be a launching point.
8th Oct 2019 11:07am
Thanks Patrick, do you mean the last line
'in a haze of peace redressed'?
'in a haze of peace redressed'?
9th Oct 2019 6:58am
Yes, I mean that, but I also mean the whole of the poem. It goes towards an ending where nothing more needs to be expressed at the moment.
17th Nov 2019 8:40pm
