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This Mysterious Love
I blush and glow
That much I know
Whenever I am around you
You let me fall
Now, crippled and pinned to your walls
In love with you
Let me continue to fly
For, I am still on your high
Loving every bit of you
You lie here with me
Blissfully asleep
Always, do I dream of you
You are who I incessantly want, need and miss
What is this?
I cannot get enough of you
In so deep I have become
Against my heart, I succumbed
Engulfed in this mysterious love with you
Published 21st Dec 2011
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21st Dec 2011 5:47pm
i like this i not much of commenting cus i'm not good at but i do know what i like good job keep writting
21st Dec 2011 6:25pm
Emptyness:)
Sigh, i write of my heart and its crazy emotions which i cant shut up or get away from. So for you (and many others) i write [smile].
Thanks for commenting anyway, i really do appreciate it. Im happy you like it.
Sigh, i write of my heart and its crazy emotions which i cant shut up or get away from. So for you (and many others) i write [smile].
Thanks for commenting anyway, i really do appreciate it. Im happy you like it.
21st Dec 2011 6:14pm
*crippled and pinned to your wall*--amazing line.My plight no better-- Jordanne.
21st Dec 2011 6:27pm
Rakhi:)
UGH, i know right!! Utter madness i tell you:)
@line-- thanks much, your comments are welcomed
[Jordanne]
UGH, i know right!! Utter madness i tell you:)
@line-- thanks much, your comments are welcomed
[Jordanne]
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2011 12:52pm
well when ya can't get enough of someone - that is about as deep as it gets - well they say if you ever fall in love - don't hold back and go all in - smiles - nice write my dear - ^v^
23rd Dec 2011 2:44pm
Sir Night:)
Sometimes its as great as can be and other times your on the precipice about to fall over -.- but thats just the waves of 'love'. Thanks much for your comment
Sometimes its as great as can be and other times your on the precipice about to fall over -.- but thats just the waves of 'love'. Thanks much for your comment
