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Re. Close To
1st Oct 2019 12:46pm
This write entices a lovely darkness. You certainly have a way with words.
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Re: Re. Close To
1st Oct 2019 1:40pm
Imagination
completely controls me,
continually
feeding and heating
glowing embers in my heart,
for the darkest dreams.
completely controls me,
continually
feeding and heating
glowing embers in my heart,
for the darkest dreams.
Re: Re. Close To
1st Oct 2019 3:44pm
Re: Re. Close To
1st Oct 2019 4:09pm
Lust travels well from mind to pen...
And pen to paper, where lust slips
And must be blotted, now and then,
In case the loving lusting strips
The thoughts that cause the pen to tell
That sensual travel story well...
And pen to paper, where lust slips
And must be blotted, now and then,
In case the loving lusting strips
The thoughts that cause the pen to tell
That sensual travel story well...
Re: Re. Close To
1st Oct 2019 6:38pm
The idea of blotting is quite sensuous in this. You are on a roll, today.
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Re. Close To
1st Oct 2019 1:29pm
Re: Re. Close To
1st Oct 2019 1:41pm
I hope so - I have a new male muse to inspire me and the thought of him is quite thrilling.
Re: Re. Close To
1st Oct 2019 1:50pm
Re. Close To
1st Oct 2019 1:44pm
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL...FOR ONE TOUCH SAYS MORE THAN WORDS FOR ITS IN THE WAY YOU TOUCH SOMEONE AS YOU DESCRIBED AS YOU LOOK DEEP WITHIN THERE EYES...NICELY COMPOSED
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Re. Close To
2nd Oct 2019 1:47am
i know its been a long while but lovely you remain
refreshingly adorable
mm
<3
refreshingly adorable
mm
<3
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Re. Close To
5th Oct 2019 2:35am
Dark succulence which draws me in and lets me feel the pulse of your desire. Truly a submission to remember.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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