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Faint Ashes
Holding on
Tighter
Gripping
So tears
... Don't fall
I think he's okay
Silent now
The water
Is peaceful
... Stay calm
A sigh
So faint
So weak
... A squeeze
Tears escape
... The slightest breeze
And He
Is Gone.
Tighter
Gripping
So tears
... Don't fall
I think he's okay
Silent now
The water
Is peaceful
... Stay calm
A sigh
So faint
So weak
... A squeeze
Tears escape
... The slightest breeze
And He
Is Gone.
Published 26th Sep 2019
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26th Sep 2019 11:11am
OUT OF THE THINGS THAT WE HAVE TO ENDURE WITHIN THIS LIFE DEATH IS THE MOST HARDEST THING TO UNDERSTAND FOR THE HEART AS WELL AS THE MIND FOR SOME ARE TAKEN WAY BEFORE THEIR TIME...NICELY COMPOSED HOMIE...
26th Sep 2019 4:39pm
Better places exist over this one that's for sure. thanks for stopping by homie!
26th Sep 2019 9:19pm
Anonymous
11th Dec 2019 7:12am
I think what I like about this is if you take all of the italicised statements in this poem they become their own micro poem. There’s little worlds within world here. The layout contributed a great deal to my enjoyment of this piece.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Thank you for sharing.
-M
13th Dec 2019 7:52pm
