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Simple Pleasures
Simple pleasures
Causing pain
Building up
To strike again
Draw them in
Shut them out
Weaving lies
Creating doubt
Love to take
But never give
Life expected
Not to live
Stealing hope
Stifling breath
Broken promise
Courting death
Cruel intention
Deed is done
Taking all
Sparing none
©️kandicejohnson
2019 All rights reserved. All materials contained are not to be used/ reproduced/ copied/ edited/ published/ transmitted/ borrowed/ duplicated/ printed/ downloaded/ uploaded in any way without my express written permission. Feel free to contact me if you so wish to use my work.
Causing pain
Building up
To strike again
Draw them in
Shut them out
Weaving lies
Creating doubt
Love to take
But never give
Life expected
Not to live
Stealing hope
Stifling breath
Broken promise
Courting death
Cruel intention
Deed is done
Taking all
Sparing none
©️kandicejohnson
2019 All rights reserved. All materials contained are not to be used/ reproduced/ copied/ edited/ published/ transmitted/ borrowed/ duplicated/ printed/ downloaded/ uploaded in any way without my express written permission. Feel free to contact me if you so wish to use my work.
Published 17th Sep 2019
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17th Sep 2019 5:56am
Dear K,
Wow! This piece made me feel this was anything but simple pleasures. Or, maybe for the narcissist. Your writing is razor sharp and to the point. I might add extremely thought provoking as well.
The rhythm is also wonderful as it keeps you moving even if you want to stop yet all the visuals created keep moving with you.
H🌷
Wow! This piece made me feel this was anything but simple pleasures. Or, maybe for the narcissist. Your writing is razor sharp and to the point. I might add extremely thought provoking as well.
The rhythm is also wonderful as it keeps you moving even if you want to stop yet all the visuals created keep moving with you.
H🌷
17th Sep 2019 10:14pm
