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alienation
I hurt alone in the dark
my loneliness is mine
it belongs to me
I'm not like other people
shhh...
don't you know we don't talk about it
not a word about the voices
it makes people uncomfortable
I'm the naked woman walking around
everyone pretending I'm not here...bare
except the predators they're well aware
did you know they take advantage?
at least they don't pretend I'm not there
so don't be surprised if I lose my virginity
to an alien...
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Re. alienation
16th Sep 2019 4:47pm
Re: Re. alienation
16th Sep 2019 4:49pm
thank you beautiful one I was just thinking how we can talk about really anything but not so much about mental health... it leads to alienation of the sufferer...
hugs you back...
love Brenda 🌹
hugs you back...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. alienation
16th Sep 2019 7:20pm
*hugs you tightly*
I'm sorry you have to face these challenges, but your words of hurt are never foreign to us. I'm sure you give many bravery & strength here without even knowing it!💖
I'm sorry you have to face these challenges, but your words of hurt are never foreign to us. I'm sure you give many bravery & strength here without even knowing it!💖
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Re: Re. alienation
16th Sep 2019 9:13pm
thank you beautiful Pandora hugs you back I'm okay really writing my feelings help a lot...
love you lady...
love Brenda ❤
love you lady...
love Brenda ❤
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16th Sep 2019 10:40pm
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Re: Re. alienation
17th Sep 2019 2:40am
thank you from my heart dearest Ethan for such a loving comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. alienation
17th Sep 2019 00:51am
I must say im praying hard for you. I know you feel alone and ignored but your not alone. Some of us just dont know what to say or how to help.
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Re: Re. alienation
17th Sep 2019 2:41am
thank you dearest Jim for your prayers your love is felt...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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17th Sep 2019 1:00am
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Re: Re. alienation
17th Sep 2019 2:41am
you're too funny dearest HF thank you for the love here...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. alienation
17th Sep 2019 3:20am
No one has the right to take advantage of anyone simply because they suffer an illness in whatever form. Be brave, be strong.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. alienation
17th Sep 2019 2:03pm
thank you beautiful Kitty for the love and insight on this write...no they don't but it can be hard to fend them off when you're not quite in your right mind... I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. alienation
17th Sep 2019 5:13am
Dear B,
Know the feeling and your strength is seriously a gift to us all. Intense write jam packed with “naked” truth ;-). ❤️H🌷
Know the feeling and your strength is seriously a gift to us all. Intense write jam packed with “naked” truth ;-). ❤️H🌷
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Re: Re. alienation
17th Sep 2019 2:04pm
thank you beautiful Honoria for the love here it's deeply felt... I appreciate you lovely one...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. alienation
17th Sep 2019 12:31pm
Re: Re. alienation
17th Sep 2019 2:05pm
thank you graciously dearest LK for the love on this write... I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. alienation
18th Sep 2019 11:08am
Re. alienation
18th Sep 2019 4:21pm