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Particles of Plasma
I feel myself freezing
I let go I let go
I can no longer breathe
I let go I let go
I see blackness all around me
I let go I let go
But the stars are shining brightly
I let go I let go
I feel my body tingling
I let go I let go
I found my lover's body
I let go I let go
He no longer sees me
I let go I let go
As I leave my body
I am no longer part of humanity
I am particles of plasma
Star dust, all of me.
I let go I let go
I can no longer breathe
I let go I let go
I see blackness all around me
I let go I let go
But the stars are shining brightly
I let go I let go
I feel my body tingling
I let go I let go
I found my lover's body
I let go I let go
He no longer sees me
I let go I let go
As I leave my body
I am no longer part of humanity
I am particles of plasma
Star dust, all of me.
Published 15th Sep 2019
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15th Sep 2019 10:47pm
I like the title and how you loop it back at the end, the repeat works well almost signalling the dispersion in stages, this would works really well when I read it out loud.
16th Sep 2019 1:14am
