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Alone # Rupi Kaur
alone is just a singular
and loneliness is so much more
of gone forlorne so much undone
a - holding- lost father, lover, son,
the foetis of a childhood
left with pieces of my M
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and loneliness is so much more
of gone forlorne so much undone
a - holding- lost father, lover, son,
the foetis of a childhood
left with pieces of my M
i
n
d
Published 13th Sep 2019
Author's Note
inspiration poem(loneliness is the sign you are in desperate need of yourself)
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13th Sep 2019 12:47pm
Bravo, Slip! This is a really good one. Best of luck on the comp!
You can put the inspiration in the author's note if you like! That way it won't be at the end of the poem.
You can put the inspiration in the author's note if you like! That way it won't be at the end of the poem.
13th Sep 2019 1:32pm
Anonymous
14th Sep 2019 12:59pm
Thank you for your participation, Slip. It's great to see you continually challenging yourself. Rupi is our first minimalist - it's a relief to be writing short entries for a change.
14th Sep 2019 2:02pm
a difficult challenge for an old male bard tip -toeing in female sensibilities with hobnail boots
