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Wind Blows Cold
Revelation comes and goes
like the tides by moon’s bent
sometimes rising to the cause
when not pulling away from shore
inconsistent if truth be told
even though the will is strong
wishing something to be said
as the shyness rules the day
to share the self outside of walls
constructed for safety’s sake
darting through the open doors
returning when the wind blows cold
forgive these failings in hindsight
exposure turned to truancy
please don’t judge what may come
look to future fates more kind.
© 2019. Sean Green. All Rights Reserved. 20190911.
like the tides by moon’s bent
sometimes rising to the cause
when not pulling away from shore
inconsistent if truth be told
even though the will is strong
wishing something to be said
as the shyness rules the day
to share the self outside of walls
constructed for safety’s sake
darting through the open doors
returning when the wind blows cold
forgive these failings in hindsight
exposure turned to truancy
please don’t judge what may come
look to future fates more kind.
© 2019. Sean Green. All Rights Reserved. 20190911.
Published 13th Sep 2019
Author's Note
The poem “Wind Blows Cold” is about the struggle to share a life in a consistent manner.
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13th Sep 2019 10:20am
Just because you haven’t done something before, doesn’t mean you shouldn’t do it.
What I mean is,
Just because you have been doing things a certain way doesn’t mean you should continue to.
If I may be blunt,
stop doing what you’re doing it’s not making you happy. We us me everyone needs to revaluate.
What I mean is,
Just because you have been doing things a certain way doesn’t mean you should continue to.
If I may be blunt,
stop doing what you’re doing it’s not making you happy. We us me everyone needs to revaluate.
