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hot air balloon
life lines, lunch lines
laugh lines, punch lines
yard lines, waiting lines
traffic lines, luggage lines
pick-up lines, farewell lines
hopefully the lines didn't make squares.
laugh lines, punch lines
yard lines, waiting lines
traffic lines, luggage lines
pick-up lines, farewell lines
hopefully the lines didn't make squares.
Published 8th Jan 2010
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8th Jan 2010 9:25am
you wrote this poem,Ashley.
I don't know where you got the idea from, but i find it such a good poem, considering it's so short.
congrats on the piece
I don't know where you got the idea from, but i find it such a good poem, considering it's so short.
congrats on the piece
8th Jan 2010 3:26pm
nice little poem
great idea - and the whole thing just works
last line: "hopefully the lines didn't make squares." puts three continiuos dots at the end which i personally like very much. well done
great idea - and the whole thing just works
last line: "hopefully the lines didn't make squares." puts three continiuos dots at the end which i personally like very much. well done
12th Jan 2010 7:42am
