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You, Me & My Anxiety
i suppose when you said you like
your women complex
and 'with a little something extra'
you didn't mean
a two for one deal
i suppose i am
'a whole lot of woman'
in a whole lot
of ways
i suppose if you seek
someone with 'personality'
you're in luck with me
some would say I have plenty
i know this wasn't
the sort of steamy threesome
you may have had on your mind
i'm sorry
your women complex
and 'with a little something extra'
you didn't mean
a two for one deal
i suppose i am
'a whole lot of woman'
in a whole lot
of ways
i suppose if you seek
someone with 'personality'
you're in luck with me
some would say I have plenty
i know this wasn't
the sort of steamy threesome
you may have had on your mind
i'm sorry
Published 6th Sep 2019
| Edited 9th Feb 2021
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Anonymous
6th Sep 2019 10:44pm
From one anxiety sufferer to another, you are stronger than you know having written this at all.
Be gentle with each other. I felt this in the guts. Thank you for your vulnerability.
-M
Be gentle with each other. I felt this in the guts. Thank you for your vulnerability.
-M
6th Sep 2019 11:09pm
Thank you for this wonderful comment and the RL add, Missy. I appreciate the sentiment, especially coming from someone who knows what it feels like.
This means a lot!
Delanee.
This means a lot!
Delanee.
7th Sep 2019 00:05am
Dear D,
I wish for you to see your beauty through the same eyes the world does.
Your poetry has such a depth as to make the reader nod their head in total agreement, and say “yes, I know just what this feels like”. Lovely! H🌷
I wish for you to see your beauty through the same eyes the world does.
Your poetry has such a depth as to make the reader nod their head in total agreement, and say “yes, I know just what this feels like”. Lovely! H🌷
7th Sep 2019 8:22am
Honoria, it truly means a lot to read this comment. Ultimately that is something I set as a goal for myself.
And thank you for your sweet words of positivity.
Delanee.
And thank you for your sweet words of positivity.
Delanee.
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7th Sep 2019 8:25am
Yes indeed, HF, this write was like me standing in front of a mirror confronting myself about some bullshit.
You always pick up on the little things that make it all seem that much bigger, thank for doing that once again.
I'm glad I did publish this after all.
Delanee.
You always pick up on the little things that make it all seem that much bigger, thank for doing that once again.
I'm glad I did publish this after all.
Delanee.
7th Sep 2019 4:32am
Let your inner voice speak the truth of who you are, not the anxiety. Revealing and honest work delanee.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
7th Sep 2019 8:26am
Sometimes it's difficult to know which voice is talking to me from inside, the anxiety has grown quite cunning over the years.
Thank you so much, lovely!
Delanee.
Thank you so much, lovely!
Delanee.
7th Sep 2019 9:15pm
Oh man. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. But how do your eyes behold the vision if you dont allow it to be processed in the mind. The mind cant funtion withou blood from the heart. So it takes every aspect to understand beauty. So if your looking at the beautiful woman you are its all of you not parts. Damn good write
8th Sep 2019 9:23am
Thank you for this comment! It is so uplifting to read, and I couldn't be happier that you enjoyed reading this spill of ink.
Bless you!
Delanee.
Bless you!
Delanee.
10th Sep 2019 8:18am
10th Sep 2019 8:37am
Anonymous
10th Oct 2019 11:24pm
A visceral and honest piece!
Anonymous
10th Oct 2019 11:39pm
an interesting read!
