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No Eyes Too Wide (at the DMV)
Summer ditched her role
and it's cold
well at least for a geezer like me
nipples protruding
the blue custom
button down shirt
I skirt that issue
and bide my time
oh long long is this line
welfare ladies sweating
and swearing
I just pass the time
lost
in thought or imagination
of what I ought not
the co-ed in black
tight fitting pants
I see her crack
a smile
as my mind runs
up and down her curves
oh how I burn
but I'm still froze
numbers called and they jump up
lottery winners without pay
filing through a clouded day
and even the clouds won't wait
for their turn
finally it's me
eyes long as I hobble
knees locked
from being chained to the chair
all matter of dignity disappeared
I shrug it off
the devil drives her course
I pass
I'm set to go
then wonder hits me
what about that fine co-ed
if only,
it would be nice to know
and it's cold
well at least for a geezer like me
nipples protruding
the blue custom
button down shirt
I skirt that issue
and bide my time
oh long long is this line
welfare ladies sweating
and swearing
I just pass the time
lost
in thought or imagination
of what I ought not
the co-ed in black
tight fitting pants
I see her crack
a smile
as my mind runs
up and down her curves
oh how I burn
but I'm still froze
numbers called and they jump up
lottery winners without pay
filing through a clouded day
and even the clouds won't wait
for their turn
finally it's me
eyes long as I hobble
knees locked
from being chained to the chair
all matter of dignity disappeared
I shrug it off
the devil drives her course
I pass
I'm set to go
then wonder hits me
what about that fine co-ed
if only,
it would be nice to know
Published 4th Sep 2019
| Edited 5th Sep 2019
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4th Sep 2019 8:10pm
OMG i remember one time i HAD AN APPOINTMENT at the DMV in southern California and it took an hour to find parking (within reasonable walking distance) and another 1.75 hrs to be seen!
In AZ, the average wait time is about 10 to 15 minutes & this is without an appointment!!
Definitely not enough time to spill anything as good as what You've spilled here, Brother!
In AZ, the average wait time is about 10 to 15 minutes & this is without an appointment!!
Definitely not enough time to spill anything as good as what You've spilled here, Brother!
4th Sep 2019 8:14pm
It was about an hour twenty wait today, the last few times it wasn't so bad...whoa is me for breaking my id in half lol
Anonymous
4th Sep 2019 8:28pm
"the co-ed in black
tight fitting pants
I see her crack
a smile
as my mind runs
up and down her curves
oh how I burn
but I'm still froze"
ROFL! Damn, that is clever play with words here, Tim! Made a mundane activity far more interesting. :-)
tight fitting pants
I see her crack
a smile
as my mind runs
up and down her curves
oh how I burn
but I'm still froze"
ROFL! Damn, that is clever play with words here, Tim! Made a mundane activity far more interesting. :-)
4th Sep 2019 9:35pm
Wonderful write ... truly immersed me in the everyday ... made it exceptional ...
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
5th Sep 2019 9:52pm
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