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Disgraced
What is worse than war
What is worse than abandonment
What is worse than death
What is worse than life
Disappointment
feeling like you no one
as sorrow sweeps deep in
running through all your veins
like a fatal virus creeping
death crawling beneath your skin
eating everything and leaving nothing
hardening your heart for ever
no love shall enter
no pain shall enter
i am as cold
as the coldest winter
What is worse than abandonment
What is worse than death
What is worse than life
Disappointment
feeling like you no one
as sorrow sweeps deep in
running through all your veins
like a fatal virus creeping
death crawling beneath your skin
eating everything and leaving nothing
hardening your heart for ever
no love shall enter
no pain shall enter
i am as cold
as the coldest winter
Published 17th Dec 2011
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20th Dec 2011 11:21pm
I think you did a great job on this poem. Love the feeling of it. Keep writing :-)
