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Who's fault?
I'm wondering why
you NEVER call
AFTER
you
BEND me over the conference table
hammering out a wicked thrill
deep and sharp
PAINFUL
like an electric drill
not once
do you give ANY sign of hesitation
so I spread my legs
in DESPERATE resignation
the very next evening
towards a couples PRIVATE destination
you flew
with your ex
on a TWO WEEK vacation
I came to
during that PERIOD
a hefty realization
REVENGE being the soul proprietor
of my sudden motivation
the joy to IMAGINE
TEARS spit
from your mother's eyes
as she faces the hard fact
of her ONLY child's DEMISE
on bent knee
in PRAYER for your absolution
you beg me to
accept one simple SOLUTION
I decide to have the FINAL say
then out of your pocket did you pay
for the mysterious pregnancy
that came YOUR way
..aren't you grateful for that "fake" abortion?
it was ALWAYS you
so RETURN my voicemails
- -
motherfucker!
Written by
LostGirl18
Published 26th Aug 2019
Author's Note
This poem is a submission for HighlyFunctional's "Oh, it was definitely you." competition
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 1:28am
Re: Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 1:47am
Thanks dearest Tallen!
You set the bar high so I need to bring my A game. (;
Best of luck in the comp!
Yours,
LostGirl
You set the bar high so I need to bring my A game. (;
Best of luck in the comp!
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 1:46am
Wow!! Motherfucker!! Wow!! His fault! Very good read! Looking forward to more from YOU!
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Re: Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 1:50am
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26th Aug 2019 1:49am
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Re: Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 1:52am
Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 2:14am
Wow is all I can say this has so much emotion and I can feel it great job my friend
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Re: Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 2:18am
Re. Who's fault?
Anonymous
26th Aug 2019 2:45am
Damn...Yeah, like that!
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Re: Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 2:54am
Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 11:31am
NICE FLOW OF SPOKEN WORDS SO FULL OF DEEP AND RAW EMOTIONS THAT ESCAPES FROM THE DEPTH OF THE SOUL..
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Re: Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 8:00pm
This definitely emerged and evolved from those dark depths.
Thanks Melvin for the read and thoughtful comment. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
Thanks Melvin for the read and thoughtful comment. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
Re: Re. Who's fault?
27th Aug 2019 12:49pm
Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 1:02pm
I don't think anything is gonna work in getting him to return your calls, not even a fake pregnancy or subsequent abortion. Would you really want his child now after he took his ex on a vacation?
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Re: Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 8:01pm
The pregnancy scare got more than a returned phone call. It got him down on his knees just where he belonged.
Thanks Sassy Snaggy - always appreciate your reads.
Take note. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Thanks Sassy Snaggy - always appreciate your reads.
Take note. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Re: Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 8:02pm
Oh, Wise One -
How I do appreciate such high praise!
Ultimate.. revenge, indeed. (;
Your friend,
LostGirl
How I do appreciate such high praise!
Ultimate.. revenge, indeed. (;
Your friend,
LostGirl
Re. Who's fault?
26th Aug 2019 11:33pm
Now I wish I'd have written this motherfuckin' piece of amazing ink...one of my favs LG.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. Who's fault?
27th Aug 2019 3:06am
Your wishes are my command, Harry.
Thanks for your kind words. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Thanks for your kind words. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Who's fault?
27th Aug 2019 7:55am
The aspect that is forgotten is that lack of communication is in fact communication. It is the expression of an indifference that can be worse then arguing.
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Re: Re. Who's fault?
27th Aug 2019 6:34pm
As fleetwood mac states:
“Players only love you when they’re playing.” (;
Ain’t that the truth. The rest is just “indifference.”
Thanks for your thoughts on this Jazz. Always a pleasure to have your honest feedback.
Yours,
LostGirl
“Players only love you when they’re playing.” (;
Ain’t that the truth. The rest is just “indifference.”
Thanks for your thoughts on this Jazz. Always a pleasure to have your honest feedback.
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Who's fault?
27th Aug 2019 7:48pm
Never got the chance to see Fleetwood Mac live but I do have a concert on dvd. As an ensemble I put them second only to Sade.
Fleetwood Mac’s band history has so many twists and turns there should be an obstacle course named in their honor.
Fleetwood Mac’s band history has so many twists and turns there should be an obstacle course named in their honor.
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29th Aug 2019 9:04am
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Re: Re. Who's fault?
29th Aug 2019 3:31pm
Humbled you think so “highly” of my poem and my poetic voice Mr. Functional. (;
Thank you kindly for the RL add. Now, you can save the best parts of me for later viewing.
Yours,
LostGirl
P.S. I will still secretly read you under the covers. Nothing’s changed. (;
Thank you kindly for the RL add. Now, you can save the best parts of me for later viewing.
Yours,
LostGirl
P.S. I will still secretly read you under the covers. Nothing’s changed. (;
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29th Aug 2019 7:04pm
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20th Sep 2019 2:01pm
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Re: Re. Who's fault?
20th Sep 2019 10:40pm