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the persistence of loss
I can resist
the fear of love
pent up
ave restlessness like moths,
enlightening me
with stains
of non-being
despite my dreams.
the loss drags on
with quaint wings
of fleshless flies,
quavered echoes
wincing and cringing
day and night
flaunts concealment;
shaded tears
shedding surprises.
the persistence of love is ours
to lose. what makes you think
I want to share
the heartache too?
bydk 08/24/19
the fear of love
pent up
ave restlessness like moths,
enlightening me
with stains
of non-being
despite my dreams.
the loss drags on
with quaint wings
of fleshless flies,
quavered echoes
wincing and cringing
day and night
flaunts concealment;
shaded tears
shedding surprises.
the persistence of love is ours
to lose. what makes you think
I want to share
the heartache too?
bydk 08/24/19
Published 25th Aug 2019
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25th Aug 2019 10:51pm
"the loss drags on
with quaint wings
of fleshless flies.."
I love the wordplay and vivid imagery throughout this poem.
Yours,
LostGirl
with quaint wings
of fleshless flies.."
I love the wordplay and vivid imagery throughout this poem.
Yours,
LostGirl
26th Aug 2019 4:03am
25th Aug 2019 11:36pm
Who indeed wants to share in the heartache. Good question. Excellent write bydk.
cheers,
buddhakitty.
cheers,
buddhakitty.
26th Aug 2019 2:38pm
26th Aug 2019 1:33am
" the loss drags on
with quaint wings
of fleshless flies, " <<<<<--------- small wings carrying a shell -- Wow! What an image!!
Loved the ending, as well. Good spill
with quaint wings
of fleshless flies, " <<<<<--------- small wings carrying a shell -- Wow! What an image!!
Loved the ending, as well. Good spill
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