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Tanka #37...what we're given
Whatever's in charge…
made me this way
no doubt for good reason
Who am I to disagree …we...
work with what we're given.
made me this way
no doubt for good reason
Who am I to disagree …we...
work with what we're given.
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Re. Tanka #37...what we're given
Anonymous
24th Aug 2019 6:49pm
That's the damn truth. That last line is powerful. Too many don't get that. Always trying to be something they're not.
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Re. Tanka #37...what we're given
24th Aug 2019 7:00pm
I think it stems from too many expectations...and trying too hard to please others...instead of caring for yourself.
That drains the reservoirs of one's resources...there often is not much to spare...that becomes a problem when... we overshare... hugs, MizWillow, Ely
That drains the reservoirs of one's resources...there often is not much to spare...that becomes a problem when... we overshare... hugs, MizWillow, Ely
Re. Tanka #37...what we're given
24th Aug 2019 8:53pm
All of this is so true.
"we...
work with what we're given."
... it's the only way we can bring forth something real - creatively. Any other approach is compensation.
"we...
work with what we're given."
... it's the only way we can bring forth something real - creatively. Any other approach is compensation.
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Re: Re. Tanka #37...what we're given
One thing I've learned...there is no forcing
creativity...it has to come in its own time...
Our job is to be receptive...so we'll know it when it comes...nurture it to fruition...and see where it takes us...
Hugs, and thanks for the RL... Ely
creativity...it has to come in its own time...
Our job is to be receptive...so we'll know it when it comes...nurture it to fruition...and see where it takes us...
Hugs, and thanks for the RL... Ely
Re. Tanka #37...what we're given
24th Aug 2019 11:35pm
I try not to work with what ive been given because it doesn't work...lol.
Good write Ely.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Good write Ely.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Tanka #37...what we're given
mebbe that's what you're supposed to be doing...my friend
making it work...anew
...Keep Writing Poetry... hugs... Ely
making it work...anew
...Keep Writing Poetry... hugs... Ely
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25th Aug 2019 5:56pm
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