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Take Your Joy
Open wide and shove it in
Gulp it down
And force a grin
Take your joy
They laugh at me
Expecting me to be
Anyone else but Zee
Take your joy
And ask no questions
Side effects give no direction
Lost between the light & darkness
Here comes a frown,
Oh no, she needs another now
Never lasting long enough
This joy is just really a bluff
Gulp it down
And force a grin
Take your joy
They laugh at me
Expecting me to be
Anyone else but Zee
Take your joy
And ask no questions
Side effects give no direction
Lost between the light & darkness
Here comes a frown,
Oh no, she needs another now
Never lasting long enough
This joy is just really a bluff
Published 16th Aug 2019
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17th Aug 2019 00:52am
Dear D,
This is intense. You’ve captured, for me, the essence of medicine head and the come down when meds wear off. Never mind the expectations of drs thinking a pill makes everything happy and all better. Very real and excellent write! H🌷
This is intense. You’ve captured, for me, the essence of medicine head and the come down when meds wear off. Never mind the expectations of drs thinking a pill makes everything happy and all better. Very real and excellent write! H🌷
17th Aug 2019 00:58am
22nd Aug 2019 1:33am
I really enjoyed this piece. The ending lines wrap the poem up perfectly.
Great writing - Syd
Great writing - Syd
22nd Aug 2019 1:34am
