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Broken Crown
They scream at me
Demanding that I stop
But I don't know how to end it
I fucking wish I could end it
This eternal suffering the fantasy of death
Alluring and enticing Seductive in his ways
Beckons me into the flames
I dont wish to paint such dark scapes
But this disease it haunts me
It has taken control
I fear I can no longer hold reign
Demanding that I stop
But I don't know how to end it
I fucking wish I could end it
This eternal suffering the fantasy of death
Alluring and enticing Seductive in his ways
Beckons me into the flames
I dont wish to paint such dark scapes
But this disease it haunts me
It has taken control
I fear I can no longer hold reign
Published 12th Aug 2019
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12th Aug 2019 2:15am
Dear D,
Intense and relatable. It makes me think when one is so unwell the exhaustion of that- all you want to do is die so there is no more pain, sadness, discomfort.
Yet, hope sometimes springs eternal represented in a new whatever captures one’s fancy.
Your writing is your tonic!! Excellent! H🌷
Intense and relatable. It makes me think when one is so unwell the exhaustion of that- all you want to do is die so there is no more pain, sadness, discomfort.
Yet, hope sometimes springs eternal represented in a new whatever captures one’s fancy.
Your writing is your tonic!! Excellent! H🌷
12th Aug 2019 2:34am
12th Aug 2019 12:28pm
DEEP THOUGHTS THAT WE ALL HAVE THOUGHT FOR ITS A STRUGGLE TO SOMETIMES LOOK AT THE WORLD AND WONDER WILL I BE MISS BUT YET SOMEHOW, YOU FIND THE STRENGTH AND COURAGE TO KEEP ON STRIVING AND MOVING ON AS YOU FIX AND PUT YOUR CROWN ON STRAIGHT AND STEP OUT PROUD FOR YOU ARE A FIGHTER AS WELL AS A SURVIVOR...SMILE
