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He imbued his soul into that of her own while they spoke in love suffused whispers. Their heartbeats sang a song of reverence as a sinuous rhythm of shared breaths filled their lungs. Anchored deeply in her writhing tides, he forged for their inner sanctum; the sacred place where she cradled him within, meeting each other in total completeness. When her desire sodden core breathed the words, "welcome home", to his very own, he then settled; their bodies spilling forth into a white lathered fountain of one.
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 10th Aug 2019
| Edited 17th Sep 2019
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10th Aug 2019 7:59am
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2019 3:28pm
Yeah, like that!
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10th Aug 2019 4:51pm
Thank you& especially so for the add..I've been offering hugs, but you're so naughty, you may be trouble!😯 Just kidding...hugd!
Re. Complete
10th Aug 2019 10:35pm
Brava, Pandora! "Anchored deep in her writhing tide" What z tingle making, romantic, super sensual line...and nautical to boot 😁💕💋
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12th Aug 2019 3:45am
Thank you, sweetness. I do tend to use some nautical words, don't I ?!🤔 Any time you get a tingle, I'm completely honored & a bit happy too.👀💋
Hopefully I can get back in the groove & catch up tomorrow. I need to stop these hiatus moments!
Hopefully I can get back in the groove & catch up tomorrow. I need to stop these hiatus moments!
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11th Aug 2019 5:53pm
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12th Aug 2019 3:46am
Thank you for your humbling words, T. It is funny how a simple pic can stir within, but it did me too!
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12th Aug 2019 3:47am
Thank you for your humbling words, T. It is funny how a simple pic can stir within, but it did me too!
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13th Aug 2019 10:09pm
Thank you for such a special comment. I appreciate all the compliments & you saw something I didn't even see. I wish I was a wordy one today to properly praise your praise..... You're awesome!!🙂
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25th Aug 2019 3:43am
You take the raw essence of sexual poetry and make is elegant. This is awesome.
John
John
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26th Aug 2019 5:45pm
Once again, humbled by your words. I thank you for the add & also the most recent one. Once my mind lets me focus from that, I can start investing my time into reading you & others.x
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17th Sep 2019 1:16am
Alice in Wonderland, nice reference
I often wonder what hints and innuendos in that book would be blatantly sordid details if the author were to write it in today's highly permissive society
I often wonder what hints and innuendos in that book would be blatantly sordid details if the author were to write it in today's highly permissive society
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17th Sep 2019 9:25pm
Omgoodness, it would be one naughty piece of erotica, not a children's fairytale! Ann Rice did a dirty trilogy based of Sleeping Beauty...it was beyond naughty tho!😁