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The Moon
The moon is more beautiful than I’m...it makes me cry because deep down I know I Would never witness beauty.... The moon is more beautiful than I’m....As it stands alone in the midnight blue sky. I wish I was beautiful as the moonlight.
The moon is beautiful than I’m .... As it shines bright making a way through the darkness and capturing everything that is hidden. The moon is more beautiful than I’m... As it cast a pure alluring light that can ease any fears or doubts just by looking at it. The moon is more beautiful than I’m ....
It hold no judgements, no pain, no regrets!!
I want to trade my existence to be the moon.....
- Nikea
The moon is beautiful than I’m .... As it shines bright making a way through the darkness and capturing everything that is hidden. The moon is more beautiful than I’m... As it cast a pure alluring light that can ease any fears or doubts just by looking at it. The moon is more beautiful than I’m ....
It hold no judgements, no pain, no regrets!!
I want to trade my existence to be the moon.....
- Nikea
Published 9th Aug 2019
| Edited 31st Jul 2020
Author's Note
Expressing how I feel about myself.
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9th Aug 2019 11:59am
Written well lasse. You are beautiful by design. All are created equal but all have their defining difference. Women have for centuries allowed the hiw a woman should look take precedence over the natural order.
Hey baby, read my poem about the Moon, cos it's sexy, like you. You are more beautiful than the Moon because you are a living thing, full of colour & you have an atmosphere & I feel attracted to your glow in the dark, lol. ;-)
No? Okay then, lol. ;-)
No? Okay then, lol. ;-)
31st Jan 2020 1:51am
Beauty comes from within. Use the feeling that you have on the outside to channel the beauty that you have within. Once you do this you will see the beauty that you possess. Remember that you are loved not for your outside beauty but for the beauty that you allow to shine inside out. The light that you see in the moon is the light that is shining on the inside of you that is fighting to get out to let the world know that you are hear.
Anonymous
18th Aug 2020 4:20am
I agree. The moon is so beautiful. I often find myself staring at it for hours every now and then.
