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times to move on ..
found instant gratification
alright
but it didn't
last
time I looked there
was always something else ..
Published 6th Aug 2019
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6th Aug 2019 3:18am
Instant gratification will have that impact... a fleeting moment can leave one buzzzing for quite some time; long after the unfolding of a moment.
An awesome write, Dartford... 😎
An awesome write, Dartford... 😎
6th Aug 2019 4:49am
ah there is never an end to something elses
one will always be chasing and chasing and chasing wont they?
fine stuff dart my friend
one will always be chasing and chasing and chasing wont they?
fine stuff dart my friend
6th Aug 2019 5:02am
6th Aug 2019 3:51pm
Clever double use of the word last ... does this effect have a name? Anyone, anyone ... ?
6th Aug 2019 5:18pm
It's a kind of verbal 'vesica piscis' - but I'm wondering what kind of 'dictionary' one could look up to find the possible existence of a specialised word to describe it. I'm intrigued too.
13th Aug 2019 10:57pm
contrastive focus reduplication
comes to mind but i am not 100% certain this is it in this spill
but comes very close, me thinks
comes to mind but i am not 100% certain this is it in this spill
but comes very close, me thinks
