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Funny, Love makes us fickle fools.
As you drive, I stare out the window
I look across at you and wonder what you wonder
Damn, how is it you make me glow?
But I do not obsess to ponder
Just being in your presence makes me fonder.
You look back at me and smile
I smile back and look away; shy
Leaning over you kiss me carefully-- fragile
Surrendering, completely, you leave me in constant sighs
Taking me to a place where, in bliss, I fly
Honey,
I guess I love you.
Funny,
Love makes us fickle fools.
While the Mind may reason, the Heart wholly rules.
I look across at you and wonder what you wonder
Damn, how is it you make me glow?
But I do not obsess to ponder
Just being in your presence makes me fonder.
You look back at me and smile
I smile back and look away; shy
Leaning over you kiss me carefully-- fragile
Surrendering, completely, you leave me in constant sighs
Taking me to a place where, in bliss, I fly
Honey,
I guess I love you.
Funny,
Love makes us fickle fools.
While the Mind may reason, the Heart wholly rules.
Published 14th Dec 2011
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14th Dec 2011 10:46pm
15th Dec 2011 00:55am
20th Dec 2011 7:12pm
I've just read your poem three times and enjoyed it more each time. I could almost feel your passion
20th Dec 2011 8:50pm
Lendavies :D
I was really giddy when i wrote this :p. Thanks much for the comment is appreciated!! glad you enjoyed it.
I was really giddy when i wrote this :p. Thanks much for the comment is appreciated!! glad you enjoyed it.
22nd Dec 2011 5:09am
22nd Dec 2011 2:14pm
Anonymous
17th Jan 2012 1:48pm
Your voice is beautiful.
As is the poem.
As is the poem.
17th Jan 2012 2:03pm
M_S:)
awwww lol thanks! the video took me at least an hour to upload-- must figure out a shorter method; i plan to do more spoken word. Thanks for the read/comment.
haha the subject line's funny hehehe
[Jordanne]
awwww lol thanks! the video took me at least an hour to upload-- must figure out a shorter method; i plan to do more spoken word. Thanks for the read/comment.
haha the subject line's funny hehehe
[Jordanne]
