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Warped Abnormality
Beyond boundaries
Bewildering aspects of conscious
Evolving through
The distorted unknown
Furthering the grasp
On the indefinite
A perpetual falling
While wandering the night
Permanent psychosis pending
Simultaneously breaking limitations
Unveiling a journey
With intention of transcendence
A fugitive furthest from conventions
Longing for the unorthodox
Passageways to the familiar irregularity
Bewildering aspects of conscious
Evolving through
The distorted unknown
Furthering the grasp
On the indefinite
A perpetual falling
While wandering the night
Permanent psychosis pending
Simultaneously breaking limitations
Unveiling a journey
With intention of transcendence
A fugitive furthest from conventions
Longing for the unorthodox
Passageways to the familiar irregularity
Published 14th Dec 2011
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2011 4:33am
somewhat interesting, but offers little else to go on...I was left wanting more. I am always a fan of the short and sweet poem. However, it has to offer more depth for it to be memorable. This is lacking that thought provoking insight that I crave. Of the thousands of poems/poets on this site, it is even harder to set yourself apart from the rest (including myself as well) All I can offer in lieu of advice, is this: think more outside the box, but don't try too hard. If you do, it'll show. Trust me, I have learned this the hard way..."laughs" good luck!
