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Lost in a First Kiss
Now comes the softest, silkiest touch
In a puckered wave of romantic bliss;
Gentle flesh resolved against gentle flesh,
In the form of a drawn-out kiss.
Nude tones fade into soft pinks as they
mingle and merge into one;
Massaging mouth and heart simultaneously,
Transferring secrets and coming undone.
His ragged exhalation is her first shallow breath,
fingers slowly weaving into wildly tossed hair;
Together transcending the noise of the world,
To join their emotions, their souls elsewhere.
In a puckered wave of romantic bliss;
Gentle flesh resolved against gentle flesh,
In the form of a drawn-out kiss.
Nude tones fade into soft pinks as they
mingle and merge into one;
Massaging mouth and heart simultaneously,
Transferring secrets and coming undone.
His ragged exhalation is her first shallow breath,
fingers slowly weaving into wildly tossed hair;
Together transcending the noise of the world,
To join their emotions, their souls elsewhere.
Published 27th Jul 2019
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28th Jul 2019 00:06am
4th Oct 2022 2:34am
Amazing! You can finally breathe again, haha. I'm only being sarky cos I'm jealous. Excellent write. I almost felt like a voyeur, such was the vivid description of your passion.
4th Oct 2022 3:29am
Jealous of what? I've read some of yours and would easily call them better. Glad you liked the descrip!
4th Oct 2022 3:49am
Awww, you're too kind. Yes the description was perfect, very arousing, in fact!
21st Oct 2022 4:46pm
I mastered a description of a first kiss
Nice poem from you, I loved the way it was written
Nice poem from you, I loved the way it was written
23rd Oct 2022 11:31am
Hoi hoi
The first of your poems is already melted in my brain.
The right measure of urgency yet (for lack of another word) elegant. As if a very good friend told me what happened.
Very very nice.
I’ll be back for more!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
The first of your poems is already melted in my brain.
The right measure of urgency yet (for lack of another word) elegant. As if a very good friend told me what happened.
Very very nice.
I’ll be back for more!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
4th Dec 2023 6:12am
Really took my mind away this portrayal of raw exultant lovemaking. Particularly loved this verse:
His ragged exhalation is her first shallow breath,
fingers slowly weaving into wildly tossed hair;
Together transcending the noise of the world,
To join their emotions, their souls elsewhere [this is DEEP union]
His ragged exhalation is her first shallow breath,
fingers slowly weaving into wildly tossed hair;
Together transcending the noise of the world,
To join their emotions, their souls elsewhere [this is DEEP union]
