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Poetic DNA
the flavor of a poet is something to be considered while reading
tread carefully you're entering a mystical area
where soul meets verse is unique to each person
more personal than a DNA strand
a misty ground..a sacred place
we come one and all
paying homage to the ones who came before us
offering our fruits of knowledge
touching one another on the deepest level
usually reserved for the gods alone
we revolve, turn and evolve
burning starlight as we go
opening vistas to the celestial
doorways for the weary ones seeking truth
collecting the energy of the cosmos
then releasing it to the world
we enter in with the understanding
this is all-consuming and powerful
channeling one of the oldest artforms
ritualistically cleansing our stream of thought
when darker energies come through
a catalyst of the purest magic
we are forever altered by this mysterious form of life
for it is a living, breathing, aethereal being
poetry...
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25th Jul 2019 10:48pm
I'm so happy this opened a new possibility of thought to you as it did me while writing this... thank you for reading and sharing your perspective...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2019 10:32pm
Amen dearest one. What a beautiful image and lesson you give on the sacredness of poetry. The poet being a high priest of the mystical relm of the Word. Beautiful as always my sweet friend. ❤️
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25th Jul 2019 10:50pm
thank you dearest Juvenalis beautiful soul... you are one of the teachers who helped me come to this conclusion... I'm so happy this spoke to you on a deeper level...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2019 10:55pm
I have nothing to teach you my sweet friend. I'm a worthless being who has failed his journey. Thank you so much for your kindness and love. ❤️
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you have not failed beautiful soul in reaching us today it's a bad day it's not over... the journey continues...while it is so painful at times imagine it this way jewels are hidden all over ones we are to collect under sadness we find one under joy other precious jewels of the spirit...one can not take the place of the other we must collect them all wherever they may be...I just read you my friend I know you are finding and keeping them...
much love to you...
Brenda 🌹
much love to you...
Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2019 11:02pm
Thank you ❤️
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25th Jul 2019 11:04pm
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25th Jul 2019 11:07pm
thank you graciously dearest Jeff I have trouble taking credit for ones like this as they are revealed to me while I'm writing them...
I deeply appreciate you dear friend...
love Brenda ✨
I deeply appreciate you dear friend...
love Brenda ✨
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26th Jul 2019 00:15am
Same here...like Bob Marley said," It's Jah write all them songs anyway, man"
love
J
love
J
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Re. Poetic DNA
25th Jul 2019 11:20pm
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN DEAR SOUL AS IT CAME FROM THE MIND AND HEART DROP DOWN BY PEN ON TO PAPER
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25th Jul 2019 11:23pm
thank you graciously dearest poet I just read the beautiful poem you posted you understand this is hidden knowledge passed down to us to be revealed where it will...
I'm happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda 🌹
I'm happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda 🌹
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25th Jul 2019 11:31pm
YES I UNDERSTAND THIS IS KNOWLEDGE TO PASS DOWN THROUGH US FROM A HIGHER POWER FOR THERE ARE THINGS WE AS PEOPLE HAVE BEEN OVER LOOKING AT THE VERY THINGS THAT ARE BEFORE US FOR THROUGH OUR WORDS HOPEFULLY THEY CAN REDISCOVER THE TRUE BEAUTY OF AND IN THE WORLD OF LIFE
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25th Jul 2019 11:45pm
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26th Jul 2019 00:13am
I have always considered poetry to be the truest form of art...the most honest...due to the fact that most of us know that our words are not going to make us money or bring us great fame or hang in some art gallery...but we do it anyway, we keep putting pen to paper...sometimes about love...and sometimes about hate, pain, and everything in between. So I toast your beautiful homage to we simple Poets. Bravo Brenda!
Cheers and Love...Harry
Cheers and Love...Harry
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Re. Poetic DNA
26th Jul 2019 5:32am
Dear B,
Wow! This is another amazing write of yours. It’s as tho’ the oracle has spoken to awake the masses from their reverie.
There’s way too much to appreciate, I’d have to cut and paste the entire work. I really took a bountiful trip reading this.
Thank you for the ride!
H 🌹
Wow! This is another amazing write of yours. It’s as tho’ the oracle has spoken to awake the masses from their reverie.
There’s way too much to appreciate, I’d have to cut and paste the entire work. I really took a bountiful trip reading this.
Thank you for the ride!
H 🌹
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Very deep and very true, often i wonder where this comes from what I spew forth on the page
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I'm not quite the poet, just a girl with some words, and I can't always bang out a piece easily, nor truly speak my emotional side.... BUT the Underground saved me & helped me grow , as it did many who call it home. If I can't write, I always have the words of the Deep to feed my soul! It should be no surprise as to whose words feed the most souls around here. All the Goddess with the purple soul needs to do is look in the mirror!!;) 🙏🌹💜
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26th Jul 2019 7:35pm
I just cannot express the feelings and thoughts here Brenda. I read it slowly several times to really let it sink in. I can feel the slow revelations you had as you were penning this. You absolutely nailed it! When we lay our ink upon the page it becomes an entity that effects me as I go and, hopefully others. I am just mimicking what you wrote.
You have touched the deep layers here that I could not express.
"the flavor of a poet is something to be considered while reading
tread carefully you're entering a mystical area
where soul meets verse is unique to each person
more personal than a DNA strand
a misty ground..a sacred place"
-Minxy!❣
You have touched the deep layers here that I could not express.
"the flavor of a poet is something to be considered while reading
tread carefully you're entering a mystical area
where soul meets verse is unique to each person
more personal than a DNA strand
a misty ground..a sacred place"
-Minxy!❣
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26th Jul 2019 7:42pm
I love the depth of this, the intimacy with the art form, to view it in such visceral and evocative detail. Wonderful measured pace to your voice. <3
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2019 10:01pm
If this isn`t
Sheer Poetic Genius ...
then I don`t know
what is?
Baby. Love. Darling. Dear. Queen. Ally.
I admire
the way you can
simply step out
of your comfort zone(s)
and pen something
that - IMHO - is simply the Best!
And if other`s don`t agree,
well Fuck`em!
love you, my Lady ... ~Devlin 🤗
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2019 10:52pm
Absolutely magnificent! Your beautiful soul so bright through these words lovely, Brenda. Big hugs and love.
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Anonymous
29th Jul 2019 10:12pm
I'm keeping this one close, beautiful Dark Angel. I have no words to give beyond...this is perfect in every way. I love you, beautiful
...ever Your Willow
...ever Your Willow
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