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I Love You in a Hi-Chew
I love you; I gave you a Hi-chew
I never denied you
And never tried to hide you
When I was lost I would always find you
You were my lil short girl, only a little over 5”2
Days with you were always sky blue
Now the road is mine and I’ve nowhere to ride to
Now I only see you from my side view
And there’s an ache when I pass by you
Did you even find the Hi-Chew?
It wasn’t grape but I hope the taste will guide you
Don’t let this space between us divide you
Don’t let another’s mask disguise you
I said I love you in that Hi-Chew
So much more than a simple haiku
The way things ended, I really want to despise you
But I couldn’t even if I tried to
Just know I said I love you in that Hi-Chew
I never denied you
And never tried to hide you
When I was lost I would always find you
You were my lil short girl, only a little over 5”2
Days with you were always sky blue
Now the road is mine and I’ve nowhere to ride to
Now I only see you from my side view
And there’s an ache when I pass by you
Did you even find the Hi-Chew?
It wasn’t grape but I hope the taste will guide you
Don’t let this space between us divide you
Don’t let another’s mask disguise you
I said I love you in that Hi-Chew
So much more than a simple haiku
The way things ended, I really want to despise you
But I couldn’t even if I tried to
Just know I said I love you in that Hi-Chew
Published 23rd Jul 2019
| Edited 26th Jun 2020
Author's Note
I'm not the best at saying it out loud, but I do believe you can show your love for someone with the simplest of gestures such as a simple piece of candy hidden away where only they can find it... and that at times can be even louder than words...
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25th Jul 2019 4:10am
The cleverness of this vibe got me.... add to that the sentimental depth of your words an on the RL it goes... and yes..i agree... love can be spoken in the simplest of gestures. ..great write..
25th Jul 2019 9:53pm
19th Nov 2019 11:32pm
20th Nov 2019 5:43pm
actions are usually louder than words and in times when I can't say them I can usually write them...
thanks for reading
thanks for reading
15th May 2020 00:55am
15th May 2020 9:06pm
thank you...
coming from you I consider that high praise :)
appreciate you checking out my poems
coming from you I consider that high praise :)
appreciate you checking out my poems
