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Shes existing
Shes in a trance.
Following the moon like it's got something to offer.
Shes in a trance.
Confusing good with evil, God someone please stop her.
Shes full of rage.
Putting edge to her words even when she speaks softly.
Shes full of rage.
Hating herself even knowing that's costly.
Shes existing.
Suppressing silent thoughts until she starts sleeping.
Shes existing. ♡A.
Following the moon like it's got something to offer.
Shes in a trance.
Confusing good with evil, God someone please stop her.
Shes full of rage.
Putting edge to her words even when she speaks softly.
Shes full of rage.
Hating herself even knowing that's costly.
Shes existing.
Suppressing silent thoughts until she starts sleeping.
Shes existing. ♡A.
Published 22nd Jul 2019
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22nd Jul 2019 7:19pm
22nd Jul 2019 7:25pm
Don't I know that feeling all too well nicely done, related to this.
Welcome poet to the lunatic asylum
Welcome poet to the lunatic asylum
22nd Jul 2019 8:45pm
Wow. I’ve just joined the site and your poem is the second one I’ve read, and wow!
How many years I’ve spent merely existing and supressing silent thoughts until elusive sleep takes reign.
Well done!
H
How many years I’ve spent merely existing and supressing silent thoughts until elusive sleep takes reign.
Well done!
H
23rd Jul 2019 4:11pm
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23rd Jul 2019 9:37am
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23rd Jul 2019 4:11pm
Funny, that line is actually my favorite! Thank you very much for the compliments! ♡
26th Jul 2019 6:04pm
I've felt this very way before, still do, but not so much the rage. I live by the moon & trust too easily....
Another welcome to you!!
Another welcome to you!!
29th Jul 2019 6:17pm
Sometimes we're like an asteroid or comet, we just have to ride out our course. We we have inside is to great a force to be acted upon by outside forces. Tight
