clip my wings

Is this what a Fallen angel believes while descending giving into to gravity;
the gravity of despair is often more than one can bear.

Loved the flow to this weighted spill

Thank you so much, Tallen, it means a lot. I’m so glad you enjoyed it to stop by and read comment❤️ Greatly appreciated.

Liv, this is a beautifully written melancholy piece. You have more right than most to spread your wings and fly. There are so many different ways to fly for such a rare bird as yourself

That’s so kind of you, luv. Thanks so much for saying these things and reading and commenting❤️

There are worse people in this World than you, Liv, who need their wings clipped, I am sure.  
You shouldn't be so hard on yourself.  

Fly!

I’ll always be hard on myself. Thanks for the kind words of support, Snaggy. And for dropping in to read and comment!

No need to clip those wings if that happens how are we going to read all your beatiful poetry and your stuff is really soaring.  Creative people are always the hardest on themselfs, I have learned to let up a bit on myself in the last few years.

Keep on flying and soar...

This is a beautiful comment, Stan. Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you stopping in to read and comment, dear❤️

my emotional reaction to this wonderful poem was sadness, then I thought even with clipped wings you still have the ability to sing.

Excellent Ink as usual :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))

This is such a wonderful comment to have received on this piece. Because I wrote it from a spot saying, “I’m not living up to your standards, take my wings, break me, I don’t deserve this pedestal.” So this comment was on point. Thanks for that, and for reading, commenting and the lovely RL add, David; you’re too kind!

humility and respect equals wizdom
i feel that tenfold here..even in the despair..


much respect...

Wow thanks so much for saying that, Naajir! I appreciate the kind words and you stopping in to read and comment❤️

Lovely heartfelt write ... Few more deserving though ... Bless and love ... .

Thanks luv. Thanks so much for stopping in to read and comment❤️

I quite enjoyed this, some nice rhymes 👍

Thanks dear, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the read and comment❤️