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if death came over
me
i have no regrets
bliss
i have
had more than
perhaps what one could say
my fair share
if death came over
me
i would tell her
let's do this
as my last moment
with my muse
lasted much more
than a life time
perhaps dear end
you missed
the moment that
obliterated
the void
the void that was
much worse
than your infinite blank
black
.
i have no regrets
bliss
i have
had more than
perhaps what one could say
my fair share
if death came over
me
i would tell her
let's do this
as my last moment
with my muse
lasted much more
than a life time
perhaps dear end
you missed
the moment that
obliterated
the void
the void that was
much worse
than your infinite blank
black
.
Published 15th Jul 2019
Author's Note
moments lived
life, lived in the moments
balms over all scars, all burns and scalds
world has to throw at
life, lived in the moments
balms over all scars, all burns and scalds
world has to throw at
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15th Jul 2019 8:02pm
Beautiful, especially with where I am at at present, cathartic even. Stay well, you.
16th Jul 2019 6:47pm
16th Jul 2019 4:37am
power & peace to you dear Adored Poet...
that eternity of love's truth...defies spacetime..
utterly powerful & deep & lighted!
that eternity of love's truth...defies spacetime..
utterly powerful & deep & lighted!
16th Jul 2019 6:48pm
and you too dear Artist!!
when there's light...void vanishes
and death loses its fear
appreciation
beyond words!
when there's light...void vanishes
and death loses its fear
appreciation
beyond words!
16th Jul 2019 6:47am
To go out with a smile on ones face is all we have a right to ask.
This left me thinking:
"Seldom do any of us leave with our just desserts."
Nice penning, brother.
This left me thinking:
"Seldom do any of us leave with our just desserts."
Nice penning, brother.
16th Jul 2019 6:50pm
:-)
welcome dear Sis!
just desserts one finds if the focus is one the one star that lights their night!
welcome is your presence Sis! welcome is the affection
beyond words
the gratitude
welcome dear Sis!
just desserts one finds if the focus is one the one star that lights their night!
welcome is your presence Sis! welcome is the affection
beyond words
the gratitude
16th Jul 2019 12:36pm
16th Jul 2019 6:51pm
welcome
dear Poet admired! oh to hear that from you bro!! :-)
thank you! :-)
dear Poet admired! oh to hear that from you bro!! :-)
thank you! :-)
Anonymous
17th Jul 2019 2:46pm
Oh gods...there is much weight in this poem. Palpable & perfect. I get this one completely
17th Jul 2019 2:50pm
Welcome dear Willows!!
you humble me with your generosity.
glad it spoke to you! :-)
you humble me with your generosity.
glad it spoke to you! :-)
