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One More Night
The canyons speak
in volumes low
as there you dwell
'pon life's plateau
a cease of sound
found in nature's crease
where creation crescendos
captured by beauty
both out and in
waiting for the gentle blowing
of another Sonoran wind
mild, refreshing, and meek
caressing confines
of an infernal cheek
eyes raise as sun starts her descent
the moon takes its rightful shape
and darkness
is undressed
if for just one more night
in volumes low
as there you dwell
'pon life's plateau
a cease of sound
found in nature's crease
where creation crescendos
captured by beauty
both out and in
waiting for the gentle blowing
of another Sonoran wind
mild, refreshing, and meek
caressing confines
of an infernal cheek
eyes raise as sun starts her descent
the moon takes its rightful shape
and darkness
is undressed
if for just one more night
Published 11th Jul 2019
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11th Jul 2019 6:51pm
You sure this isn't a romantic love spill?
It's how it comes across for me.
Very nicely spilled -- either way
It's how it comes across for me.
Very nicely spilled -- either way
11th Jul 2019 6:51pm
Anonymous
11th Jul 2019 6:58pm
"eyes raise as sun starts her descent
the moon takes its rightful shape
and darkness
is undressed
if for just one more night"
Talk about a perfect ending to a beautiful poem. Always tucking something hidden in the textures & contours of your poetry...
the moon takes its rightful shape
and darkness
is undressed
if for just one more night"
Talk about a perfect ending to a beautiful poem. Always tucking something hidden in the textures & contours of your poetry...
11th Jul 2019 7:05pm
11th Jul 2019 7:32pm
12th Jul 2019 2:51pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
11th Jul 2019 9:49pm
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12th Jul 2019 2:51pm
