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Paysage
Alongside the highway,
extended rows of tiger lilies
greet every passing car,
even those which turn into
the rural cemetery, with
an openly defiant tongue.
extended rows of tiger lilies
greet every passing car,
even those which turn into
the rural cemetery, with
an openly defiant tongue.
Published 7th Jul 2019
Author's Note
An improvisation, currently unsure whether to extend it; but felt it was strong enough to publish as is.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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7th Jul 2019 11:22pm
Our writing couldn't be more different lol but it has not the slightest effect on how much I appreciate your subtle skill, economy and striking detail and perceptions through your ink. Your write, as others have, paints a portrait for the mind's eye that invites us to contemplate the unspoken truths revealed in the milieu.
7th Jul 2019 11:28pm
Am now more curious to see this for myself; unfortunately I've been slow in catching up with your and everyone else's work. There's so much!
7th Jul 2019 11:41pm
I hear you. I'm a part time caregiver, part time library assistant, podcaster and site editor and the more people I follow, the less time I have to really give an in depth critique to someone's write.
