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Look
We danced all night to the beat of the band
you took my hand, and I looked in your eyes
the what ifs laid in wonder
I wandered a bit til the lights came on
a spark like that, made us both pretend
life had started again
I breathed you in
in one last final breathe
we said we wouldn't forget
and fate would bring us back
if it was meant to be
no numbers took
just a kiss, a smile
and a never forgetting look
you took my hand, and I looked in your eyes
the what ifs laid in wonder
I wandered a bit til the lights came on
a spark like that, made us both pretend
life had started again
I breathed you in
in one last final breathe
we said we wouldn't forget
and fate would bring us back
if it was meant to be
no numbers took
just a kiss, a smile
and a never forgetting look
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JusTim_
Published 7th Jul 2019
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Re. Look
Anonymous
7th Jul 2019 5:00pm
This has a Garth Brooks
feel to it ... The Dance, I believe
is what the song is called.
But yeah ... now I`m in the mood
to hear that song😊.
I was working as a cashier/stock girl
for K`Mart - when they existed - some
long years back, and Garth had stopped
by to do a promo on his debut album
when he was just starting out.
I was no more than five feet from him.
He`s very short ... I`m 5`11 and he was
shorter than that ... anyway, and if I
knew he was going to be where he
was today, I would have asked for an
autograph; could have even shook the
son`of`a`bitch`s hand but I was young
and into rock!
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7th Jul 2019 5:08pm
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2019 5:23pm
wow! You saw him in concert?
That`s great😉.
I`d like to see George Strait,
Randy Travis...
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Re. Look
7th Jul 2019 5:02pm
Re. Look
7th Jul 2019 8:33pm
I also thought of the dance! But like NO NUMBERS TOOK? Ahh, waste haha, jk. Excellent write, Tim!
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Re. Look
Anonymous
8th Jul 2019 2:45pm
Sometimes it's the moments that matter...not expectations of possibility. I like it
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Re: Re. Look
8th Jul 2019 2:57pm
Thanks Willow, sometimes we get so caught up on the future we forget to enjoy the present 🙂
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8th Jul 2019 8:23pm
Re. Look
8th Jul 2019 8:26pm
This is one of your best Tim. Willow nailed it! So very serendipitous!
-Minx❣
-Minx❣
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