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Just a typo'
I am a heathen
so heaven or hell
holds no fears for me
no myths to dispel
geographically challenged
confusion to quell
I thought heaven was up
and down to hell
yet as I sit here
enraptured by life
the penny drops
and I forget my strife
is Heaven a place on earth
OR MAYBE ... a person?
just a minor tweak
to letters and sound
head in a whirl
yet feet on the ground
lose the A and V
don't you see?
take the 'L' from love
... heaven's be!
H E L E N is the result
a present, a gift
a happy joining of souls
you get my drift.
so heaven or hell
holds no fears for me
no myths to dispel
geographically challenged
confusion to quell
I thought heaven was up
and down to hell
yet as I sit here
enraptured by life
the penny drops
and I forget my strife
is Heaven a place on earth
OR MAYBE ... a person?
just a minor tweak
to letters and sound
head in a whirl
yet feet on the ground
lose the A and V
don't you see?
take the 'L' from love
... heaven's be!
H E L E N is the result
a present, a gift
a happy joining of souls
you get my drift.
Published 7th Jul 2019
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Just one of those days when things are good
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7th Jul 2019 11:41am
Beautiful write
the sentiment expressed
oh so well
Home. Is neither a house nor a place something more than these... the haven, where you find p e a c e.
I loved this one.
the sentiment expressed
oh so well
Home. Is neither a house nor a place something more than these... the haven, where you find p e a c e.
I loved this one.
7th Jul 2019 11:48am
7th Jul 2019 8:52pm
8th Jul 2019 7:21pm
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
25th Jul 2019 11:31am
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28th Jun 2020 12:52pm
This was beautiful and very well written - nicely done! "A happy joining of souls"... Lovely verse :)
