deepundergroundpoetry.com
4000 YEARS
Published 6th Jul 2019
| Edited 9th Jul 2019
Author's Note
Entry for the #determination visual poem contest.
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7th Jul 2019 1:23pm
To survive that long is amazing but it still feels like a sever loss. Nice Haiku.
8th Jul 2019 2:40am
Thanks Josh. I write so many senryu that it's nice to just do a nature haiku.
7th Jul 2019 4:23pm
A loss beyond the imagination.
Death
if a true elder.
This left me moved Kumar.
Death
if a true elder.
This left me moved Kumar.
8th Jul 2019 2:41am
Thank you cold_fusion. These trees- they are indescribably beautiful with their swirls and ivory-like wood.
