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Swivel on this SB # Troll Snugglebuck
You see this guy I say he's hanging
Crawled from under a stone and minging
Do you smell something like dead fish
Snuggs the bug enjoys that dish
The life thats best descibed as midden
The middle earth of all things rotten
The imp and sprite the devils pets
Follishness and impudence
Post it note stuck right on the forehead
Of narrow brow he's a Richard
A donk with arms so long that touch the ground
Evolution lost, expressed by grunting sounds
Posted lots of bits and bobs, all inept
Time to take him down a step
Defiled my competition with a note
Downloaded picture not just quotes
Scrawled, looks like in caveman chalk
Not a verse or rythme, no prose just after thought
For you to judge put a solid case maybe
That he can troll the same as me
But who is he just trying to KID
The cloven hoof of sure footed spite
Climb the narrow ledge and not polite
A goatee beard I laugh outright
Crawled from under a stone and minging
Do you smell something like dead fish
Snuggs the bug enjoys that dish
The life thats best descibed as midden
The middle earth of all things rotten
The imp and sprite the devils pets
Follishness and impudence
Post it note stuck right on the forehead
Of narrow brow he's a Richard
A donk with arms so long that touch the ground
Evolution lost, expressed by grunting sounds
Posted lots of bits and bobs, all inept
Time to take him down a step
Defiled my competition with a note
Downloaded picture not just quotes
Scrawled, looks like in caveman chalk
Not a verse or rythme, no prose just after thought
For you to judge put a solid case maybe
That he can troll the same as me
But who is he just trying to KID
The cloven hoof of sure footed spite
Climb the narrow ledge and not polite
A goatee beard I laugh outright
Published 6th Jul 2019
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7th Jul 2019 4:14am
"Posted lots of bits and bobs, all inept
Time to take him down a step
Defiled my competition with a note
Downloaded picture not just quotes"
Slips poem hurts. The above quote hurts the most.
Why?😳
Cause the truth hurts when your a jerk, like me, living in an alternate reality.😣
"Mommy, all the poets at poetry school are picking on me. They keep calling me things that I actually am! Make them stop.😪
Time to take him down a step
Defiled my competition with a note
Downloaded picture not just quotes"
Slips poem hurts. The above quote hurts the most.
Why?😳
Cause the truth hurts when your a jerk, like me, living in an alternate reality.😣
"Mommy, all the poets at poetry school are picking on me. They keep calling me things that I actually am! Make them stop.😪
Anonymous
20th Jul 2019 3:28am
This isn't poetry... This is a rap battle. You have skills. Just a suggestion, but you should try applying your talent to something that actually represents something other than what this world has enough of already. Intolerance and hatred... for what?? Spread messages of love and life and exploration... Be unique man. Don't be a zombie eyed drone like the masses. 💯
MAN that's refreshin But at the age of 77 change comes hard the point I'm stressin
im the problem not the solution
im the problem not the solution
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Sep 2019 5:49pm
1st Sep 2019 5:47pm
I don't think that view of self should be given thought let alone suffice as reason. You are far from the problematic gift you declare in self treason. Your mind has given so much from the allowance of absorbing without capacity, and yet when looking deeper and in places unknown from which to see and find thy self to have grown. Criticism my friend this is not, neither construct or destruct in designations plot. Simply my addoration and praise for all that you do, to inspire free thought in others from the inspiration with you. Never forget you are a pilot of the vessel for generations coming in tune. Rare I would say in the generation of you, to seek knowledge and give. To still have open channels for no doubts, that which comprised your class and generation, are stuck in their shroud. You are nothing alike to be compared. This is I believe to be the greatest of compliment in my depiction of your greatness shared. Keep doing what you enjoy and inspires you to find more of just that with care!
