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The Other Side
It is but the east
that casts the first stone,
harsh,
first light, hit from the thrown
tis morning, but you're too soon
darkness begs to bleed in technicolor
to dream in an element of surprise
no pain that pierce the eye
I am the devil, you call
not your typical thrust
a wicked witch who left the west
here to steal your treasure
and your trust
now open, and see
the fear, the heat
the dying, left
inside of me
that casts the first stone,
harsh,
first light, hit from the thrown
tis morning, but you're too soon
darkness begs to bleed in technicolor
to dream in an element of surprise
no pain that pierce the eye
I am the devil, you call
not your typical thrust
a wicked witch who left the west
here to steal your treasure
and your trust
now open, and see
the fear, the heat
the dying, left
inside of me
Published 29th Jun 2019
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29th Jun 2019 1:45pm
1st Jul 2019 5:44pm
29th Jun 2019 2:46pm
Right, Ahavati? I read this once, and then came back and it (no pun intended) was shed in a whole new light. Really excellent, Tim.
1st Jul 2019 5:44pm
29th Jun 2019 4:28pm
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29th Jun 2019 9:54pm
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30th Jun 2019 9:06am
There is a weaving in this with a multifaceted twist, and I want to get back around it from all angles to not miss the extra's :) Thank you for depth-provoking lines. It creates responses in me I want to be able to pin down. That in itself is a gift to me.
Excellent write, Tim!
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Skye
Excellent write, Tim!
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Skye
1st Jul 2019 5:46pm
Anonymous
30th Jun 2019 10:15am
I keep coming back to this and don’t know what to say, can’t even explain how it does what it does, I’m going to have to think on it but it’s damn good
1st Jul 2019 5:46pm
Anonymous
1st Jul 2019 8:33pm
Whoa...I got no words...
2nd Jul 2019 4:11pm
