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Babbling Brooke
Take me down to the babbling brooke where I can rest my mind. The mighty oak filters the sunlight. The only sounds are the water and the wind. They drown out the turmoil that suffocates my mind. Lie me down and just let it be. No need for talking. Just be beside me, your spirit next to mine. I don't know what I'm thinking. But you fill my void beautifully. Peace is what I need, among the complications of life. You are my strength, my answer and my muse. When life becomes dreary, dirty and hard you are there to pick me up, clean me off and inspire me to carry on.
Published 14th Jun 2019
| Edited 15th Jun 2019
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2019 10:24pm
An oasis of peace is a gift. Always find your happy place, no matter what or where it may be. In my home town, I had my mountains. Tall, strong and eternal. I would go up high and sit on the edge of the slopes and breathe in all the power of that greatness and I would find peace. Now, those mountains, are far away and I have no where, if not my fantasy and imagination, to turn to. But still, with all my moments, I find my oasis in the souls that I meet and love. Be strong. You are not alone. Hugs J
OH THANK YOU SWEET JUVY!! You are so precious !! What a beautiful thing to share. You write with such elegance that your ink sparkles. This comment is a spill in and of itself! I can almost see your mountain. What a beautiful metaphor Juvy! You are a mountain. Stronge and unmovable, beauty there to behold. Just cast my eyes your way.
-Minx❣
-Minx❣
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
14th Jun 2019 11:17pm
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Oh it is "J"!
I love being beside the stream. I need to revise it. This ink was written quickly as it bubbled onto the page. I plan to go back to it soon. As always, I appreciate your feedback.
-Minx❣
I love being beside the stream. I need to revise it. This ink was written quickly as it bubbled onto the page. I plan to go back to it soon. As always, I appreciate your feedback.
-Minx❣
15th Jun 2019 00:13am
Mmmm, what better place than chatty brook to break up the silence but still just enough nature to put a spirit at ease
and whether IRL or just imagery
both are valid and both are serene........
Peaceful spill, Little Sister
and whether IRL or just imagery
both are valid and both are serene........
Peaceful spill, Little Sister
15th Jun 2019 8:07pm
Thank you my 'Sweet "T"'!
One of my happy places! I love you big brother! I'm taking time to balance myself. Break down my troubles and let them float away. Leaving peace in their wake. Serenity swirling in lovely swirls.
Oh my, I really need to revise this one. It's still spilling out "T", lol.
-Minxy❣
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One of my happy places! I love you big brother! I'm taking time to balance myself. Break down my troubles and let them float away. Leaving peace in their wake. Serenity swirling in lovely swirls.
Oh my, I really need to revise this one. It's still spilling out "T", lol.
-Minxy❣
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15th Jun 2019 2:15am
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15th Jun 2019 3:18pm
You say your not a poet but your writing is truly an inspiration dear minx
15th Jun 2019 8:14pm
You are so sweet Liam! This is something that inspires me. But it just picked me up and swept me away. (Like right now, lol) This one is still spilling out even in my replies. It has more to be written, lol. Thank you!
-Minxy ❣
-Minxy ❣
15th Jun 2019 8:26pm
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29th Jun 2019 8:47pm
The voice of the elements ease disturbing thoughts brought on by the physical wanting of a troubled life which needs the comfort of the non hurt other.
