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As One
. . . it is not but once
flayed
I
a mere mortal
of heart
not just the beats
as flutters swarm
we warm
in the desert of the heat
our song ‘s repeat repeat
to knees we're drawn
a painting in chalk
the colors we walk
not just black nor red
pain, blood, tears
there's comfort in years
to come
we come
together
in time, in faith
our fate,
succulently devoured
each hour
as one
flayed
I
a mere mortal
of heart
not just the beats
as flutters swarm
we warm
in the desert of the heat
our song ‘s repeat repeat
to knees we're drawn
a painting in chalk
the colors we walk
not just black nor red
pain, blood, tears
there's comfort in years
to come
we come
together
in time, in faith
our fate,
succulently devoured
each hour
as one
Published 11th Jun 2019
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11th Jun 2019 3:49am
11th Jun 2019 3:54am
11th Jun 2019 4:14am
“we warm
in the desert of the heat
our song ‘s repeat repeat
to knees we're drawn
a painting in chalk
the colors we walk...”
Oh. Sighs. This, is absolutely gorgeous... in all its entirety, Tim ! 🌹
in the desert of the heat
our song ‘s repeat repeat
to knees we're drawn
a painting in chalk
the colors we walk...”
Oh. Sighs. This, is absolutely gorgeous... in all its entirety, Tim ! 🌹
11th Jun 2019 4:25am
11th Jun 2019 5:09am
I sigh & smile for your beautiful fate, Tim.
The love for your muse gleams in your work these days!! Love this❤
The love for your muse gleams in your work these days!! Love this❤
12th Jun 2019 9:49pm
11th Jun 2019 7:26am
There's a loving skip (beat) to this
as lovers skipping along a brick road.......
Liking this romantic spill, Brother
as lovers skipping along a brick road.......
Liking this romantic spill, Brother
12th Jun 2019 9:49pm
12th Jun 2019 9:50pm
Anonymous
11th Jun 2019 1:39pm
It's incredibly beautiful to read your words of love. Like a sunrise sneaking over the mountains...one moment it's just a glow....the next it's a world on glorious fire. Amazing...
12th Jun 2019 9:51pm
11th Jun 2019 2:23pm
Love this one JT ... the structure ... the crisp lines ... the sprinkle of rhyme ... excellent poeting ...
12th Jun 2019 9:51pm
Anonymous
11th Jun 2019 5:10pm
...a great heart, luv❤
12th Jun 2019 9:52pm
12th Jun 2019 4:54pm
12th Jun 2019 9:52pm
