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Wild lust
Let me lay you down
Upon verdant plains
Your hair spread
Capturing suns rays
Let me worship you
In all places wild
The places of my heart
That have shaped me
Let me touch you
With tender lips
Like the warm sun
On your bare skin
Let me claim you
With wild lust
Taking all of you
And giving all of me
Let us forever remember
The romances of youth
Our love beneath rampant sun
Where our lust once ran wild.
Upon verdant plains
Your hair spread
Capturing suns rays
Let me worship you
In all places wild
The places of my heart
That have shaped me
Let me touch you
With tender lips
Like the warm sun
On your bare skin
Let me claim you
With wild lust
Taking all of you
And giving all of me
Let us forever remember
The romances of youth
Our love beneath rampant sun
Where our lust once ran wild.
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Re. Wild lust
9th Jun 2019 3:54pm
I have not knocked on our door in quite sometimes, please forgive my absence, but this poem is simply amazing, I am feeling the beautiful stanzas in all its splendid glory
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9th Jun 2019 5:13pm
I have not been particularly prolific in writing of late, but thank you for reading this piece - I'm glad you liked it.
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9th Jun 2019 5:16pm
Re. Wild lust
9th Jun 2019 5:19pm
This is such a romantic piece..admiration & sweet love in nature's realm..it doesn't get any better than that!🍃🌿
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9th Jun 2019 5:22pm
Re: Re. Wild lust
9th Jun 2019 5:32pm
Still be my heart, a true story at that. 💘
May you encounter more to treasure, R!!
May you encounter more to treasure, R!!
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Re. Wild lust
9th Jun 2019 11:23pm
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10th Jun 2019 9:18am
Re. Wild lust
10th Jun 2019 2:11pm
“Let me claim you
With wild lust
Taking all of you
And giving all of me..”
Sighs. That’s just gorgeous... and she’s a lucky girl !
Nice write, RJM... 🔥🔥🔥
With wild lust
Taking all of you
And giving all of me..”
Sighs. That’s just gorgeous... and she’s a lucky girl !
Nice write, RJM... 🔥🔥🔥
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Re: Re. Wild lust
10th Jun 2019 10:16pm
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
13th Jun 2019 11:48am
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Re: Re. Wild lust
13th Jun 2019 12:46pm
Re. Wild lust
17th Sep 2019 5:20am
This has a soft simple grace to hit that's warming, without overwhelming the reader.
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