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My OK Life...
Me in the living room (as always)
Him in the family room on the computer (as always)
ME: I got tattooed....
HIM: ok.....
ME: I got my nose pierced.....
HIM: ok.....
ME: I am planning on going skydiving next week....
HIM: ok.....
ME: I am going out of town again next month...
HIM: ok....
........and then I imagined being able to tell him.....
ME: and I got fucked in the most delicious, juicy, erotic way ever by someone else and I can not wait for it to happen again!!!
HIM: ok.....
Him in the family room on the computer (as always)
ME: I got tattooed....
HIM: ok.....
ME: I got my nose pierced.....
HIM: ok.....
ME: I am planning on going skydiving next week....
HIM: ok.....
ME: I am going out of town again next month...
HIM: ok....
........and then I imagined being able to tell him.....
ME: and I got fucked in the most delicious, juicy, erotic way ever by someone else and I can not wait for it to happen again!!!
HIM: ok.....
Published 7th Dec 2011
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7th Dec 2011 2:47am
Anonymous
7th Dec 2011 5:59pm
Paloma,
Ha! That is so true! Enjoyed!
tornado
Ha! That is so true! Enjoyed!
tornado
Anonymous
9th Dec 2011 1:38am
i loved this poem!! great read! WELCOME to DU!
9th Dec 2011 2:33am
Thank you Mememe, glad to be here.... I finally found a place where I can fly freely!!
Anonymous
9th Dec 2011 7:25pm
What would he say if you told him you were thinking about killing him? Id bet he would say, "okay". There's your permission. Problem solved. Hehe...
Seriously enjoyed this true to life piece. Thanks for the read. Keep it up, and welcome.
Seriously enjoyed this true to life piece. Thanks for the read. Keep it up, and welcome.
Thank you for your comment Chameleon!!! Totally true story....my tattoo looks amazing and my nose piercing was totally worth it....going skydiving Sunday!!!! ;)
Paloma
Paloma
Anonymous
9th Dec 2011 8:43pm
Check, check, check. All thats left is to take care of the imagined part. I say go for it. Life it too short for complacency. Youre better than "okay". He should see that and give you what you crave. More power to you!
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25th Feb 2012 6:31am
It's funny how technology hasn't really changed anything in this sense. I mean yes, the breakdown of communication can be attributed to the computer , but Relationships have always tough. Quite enjoyable either way though.
