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Once Upon A Wishing Star
Once upon a wishing star,
I wished a wish that went too far.
I wished that everything would go back,
and after that the sky turned black.
Once upon a wishing star,
I wished a wish that went too far.
Now I know and now I've learned,
that everybody waits their own turn.
I wished a wish that went too far.
I wished that everything would go back,
and after that the sky turned black.
Once upon a wishing star,
I wished a wish that went too far.
Now I know and now I've learned,
that everybody waits their own turn.
Published 7th Dec 2011
| Edited 8th Dec 2011
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8th Dec 2011 2:04am
at the end of the poem can u put "own" before turn. I think the meter is off there. all the best I like ur stuff. WriteRightOn.com
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