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You - originally written November 19 2011
When I look into those big green eyes
I always see such love in your eyes
I like the way you notice when other guys stare
I love your hands, and the way they feel in my hair.
I love your back as I grip your body over mine
I love the shivers you send up my spine.
I love the way you kiss my neck
I love that I know exactly what you expect.
I always see such love in your eyes
I like the way you notice when other guys stare
I love your hands, and the way they feel in my hair.
I love your back as I grip your body over mine
I love the shivers you send up my spine.
I love the way you kiss my neck
I love that I know exactly what you expect.
Published 6th Dec 2011
| Edited 7th Dec 2011
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Anonymous
6th Dec 2011 5:05am
that was spectacular [: its hard to find ppl with good flow now a days! bravo!
Anonymous
7th Dec 2011 1:56am
You did well...it flowed together nicely :)
25th Feb 2014 3:26am
