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MAGICIS CORPORIS HUMANI - A Villanelle
Subcutaneous sensors euphoria stimulates.
Myriad, stealthy pleasure centers designed to fuel desires.
Be warned, if touched improperly they’ll open Hades gates.
Mere vibration, fabric graze, cock or nipple elevates.
Abundant are erogenous spots that spark erotic fires.
Subcutaneous sensors euphoria stimulates.
Life condemned to fear and shame just because one masturbates.
Deny amorous stimuli, the joy that it inspires.
Be warned, if touched improperly they’ll open Hades gates.
Clitoris gem, rubbed, toyed, licked, deep orgasm generates
Tongue’s glide, lips’ press, hand’s caress bare skin electrifiers
Subcutaneous sensors euphoria stimulates.
Famished mid sensual feast, yet sated by empty plates?
Born with sexual impulses, judged by what then transpires.
Be warned, if touched improperly they’ll open Hades gates.
Love of partner, oneself, innate urges accentuates.
Unbridled ecstasy comes when heart, nerve endings conspire
Subcutaneous sensors euphoria stimulates.
Be warned, if touched improperly they’ll open Hades gates.
Myriad, stealthy pleasure centers designed to fuel desires.
Be warned, if touched improperly they’ll open Hades gates.
Mere vibration, fabric graze, cock or nipple elevates.
Abundant are erogenous spots that spark erotic fires.
Subcutaneous sensors euphoria stimulates.
Life condemned to fear and shame just because one masturbates.
Deny amorous stimuli, the joy that it inspires.
Be warned, if touched improperly they’ll open Hades gates.
Clitoris gem, rubbed, toyed, licked, deep orgasm generates
Tongue’s glide, lips’ press, hand’s caress bare skin electrifiers
Subcutaneous sensors euphoria stimulates.
Famished mid sensual feast, yet sated by empty plates?
Born with sexual impulses, judged by what then transpires.
Be warned, if touched improperly they’ll open Hades gates.
Love of partner, oneself, innate urges accentuates.
Unbridled ecstasy comes when heart, nerve endings conspire
Subcutaneous sensors euphoria stimulates.
Be warned, if touched improperly they’ll open Hades gates.
Published 23rd May 2019
| Edited 24th May 2019
Author's Note
I am fascinated by sex...as is evident by my oeuvre. Too many of us were programmed to think of sex as dirty, naughty, sinful etc.. Recognizing so many cruel, horrific, evil, and criminal things are done by the abuse and misuse of the power of sex. I prefer to think of sex as one of the most beautiful, deeply emotional experiences one can share with a partner or oneself. I think because of its taboo reputation it has been weaponized by inhuman monsters.
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24th May 2019 1:14am
24th May 2019 2:35am
24th May 2019 2:00am
Nicely written! I have yet to attempt this form. I think I lack the patience to make it work!
Wholeheartedly agree with your note, too. Sex is a wonderful, powerful force, easily misused and abused. I think it's also sometimes imbued with much more mystique than necessary, making it too heavy a subject to handle. If we could just relax and communicate clearly about it, we'd all have a lot more fun. I like fun! 😀
Wholeheartedly agree with your note, too. Sex is a wonderful, powerful force, easily misused and abused. I think it's also sometimes imbued with much more mystique than necessary, making it too heavy a subject to handle. If we could just relax and communicate clearly about it, we'd all have a lot more fun. I like fun! 😀
24th May 2019 2:40am
Amen, ma amie! I love fun as well. 😁And sex can be a lot of fun if the time is taken to savor the experience
24th May 2019 4:20am
Oh. That fascination with sex is absolutely normal... so embrace it & nurture it as passion & desire is what makes us dance in the fire !
I loved the heat you brought forth in this one ~ 🔥🔥🔥
I loved the heat you brought forth in this one ~ 🔥🔥🔥
Thank you so much, Shadow_Starzz! I am glad you enjoyed the piece and that my passion for the subject shone through.
Your comment is fantastic and it appears we are kindred spirits in this regard. It felt pretty damn good to bring the heat. 😁💥
Your comment is fantastic and it appears we are kindred spirits in this regard. It felt pretty damn good to bring the heat. 😁💥
Anonymous
26th May 2019 2:13pm
firstly, fine form, mon ami x honestly, i have no patience for it and just sat here admiring it for a while
secondly, gorgeous write. you're a true sensualist and mayhap this is why we click so well... loved from start to finish
xo
secondly, gorgeous write. you're a true sensualist and mayhap this is why we click so well... loved from start to finish
xo
26th May 2019 3:43pm
Спасибо дорогая катя! I will admit this style takes patience and a lot of time. The hardest part for me is to form some sort of agreement in each stanza with the repeated phrase. Otherwise it seems out of place and only there to meet the forms design. When I have the time I enjoy the challenge. I enjoyed writing this piece because I had to continually review the past lines and it was actually a real turn on and the imagination ran wild.
Writing with you and reading your work is a mind expanding, blowing pleasure because we understand each other so well. I have not lead quite the adventurous life as you but we share the deep regard for the power of sex. You definitely know how to push my buttons and it's a real high to bask in your brilliance.
Writing with you and reading your work is a mind expanding, blowing pleasure because we understand each other so well. I have not lead quite the adventurous life as you but we share the deep regard for the power of sex. You definitely know how to push my buttons and it's a real high to bask in your brilliance.
26th May 2019 11:02pm
I liked the form and content of your villanelle. What was interesting to me was thar the way you arranged the words with this form, gave it and odd digital vibe, almost like techno music, and that is a strange outcome because the form itself is so archaic. Cool experimentation and poem.
26th May 2019 11:18pm
Thank you, Freek! Your comment is intriguing. I am glad you like the piece and I am thrilled you pointed out the techno vibe. I really enjoy the insight and will try and sense that vibe as well.
Cheers!
Cheers!
27th May 2019 3:44am
Sexy, sexy, sexy as hell. This was a more than pleasurable read. Now take a bow.😉
This shows me a better way to understand the format, put the sex into it & I get it more. I really want to do one myself. Brava for you, this time!
This shows me a better way to understand the format, put the sex into it & I get it more. I really want to do one myself. Brava for you, this time!
27th May 2019 5:34am
Thank you, Pandora! Yes sex is language of speak well. I'm glad it helped to illuminate the form. I am confident you can tackle the Villanelle. Pick words, in the first two lines, that have rhyming possibilies, otherwise it'll drive you nuts looking for pairings. Also, the lines are typically 8-10 syllables. I chose longer phrases to fit all I wanted to say.
