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Life Isn't Always Easy
I can feel myself
getting further and further away
from myself
again
though this time I swore
that I would show compassion
but then I look at you
and see pity in your gaze
and I wish I had already
disappeared
before you met
this me
getting further and further away
from myself
again
though this time I swore
that I would show compassion
but then I look at you
and see pity in your gaze
and I wish I had already
disappeared
before you met
this me
Published 23rd May 2019
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23rd May 2019 12:06pm
23rd May 2019 12:51pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
23rd May 2019 12:14pm
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23rd May 2019 1:06pm
You're so kind, HF. I couldn't be happier with this encouraging comment. I was a little wary about this poem since I wrote it up on a whim and just one flow without really tweaking at it.
Cheers, friend!
Cheers, friend!
23rd May 2019 1:51pm
How can we feel sorry for a man that loves a woman who writes such a sweet poetry?
23rd May 2019 1:59pm
23rd May 2019 5:45pm
Love the feelings put on display here. a vulnerable delight we can relate to.
well penned piece. keep'em coming
Drifting and lost in afloat in a world cussing at gods
dismiss this notions of compassion.
through the floorboards in a tin box is where I buried the real me.
well penned piece. keep'em coming
Drifting and lost in afloat in a world cussing at gods
dismiss this notions of compassion.
through the floorboards in a tin box is where I buried the real me.
23rd May 2019 6:16pm
Thank you for the appreciation, samael. I love the piece you added to your comment. Very eloquent!
I am glad you can relate.
Delanee.
I am glad you can relate.
Delanee.
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
24th May 2019 4:37am
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