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Poetry on High : Volume II
you are like smoke that evaporates
soon becoming a faint memory
of a cigarette once lit
upon a drunken memory of love.
soon becoming a faint memory
of a cigarette once lit
upon a drunken memory of love.
Published 22nd May 2019
Author's Note
Another poem written under slight influence.
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22nd May 2019 9:52am
22nd May 2019 9:54am
Yes, it will always remain just that. I'm glad you see it that way.
Thanks for the comment.
Delanee.
Thanks for the comment.
Delanee.
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
22nd May 2019 11:01am
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22nd May 2019 11:03am
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
22nd May 2019 11:34am
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22nd May 2019 1:40pm
Oh my, HF, thank you for this appraisal! I had the poem lying around for a few years - maybe it really is like good wine… Somehow I felt like throwing it out there today.
So thank you, a lot. It does dig very deep.
So thank you, a lot. It does dig very deep.
5th Jun 2019 2:26am
I am enjoying the analogy as it relates to so many relationships of all sorts. - bim
5th Jun 2019 10:24am
Thank you, Bim. I had not thought of it like that, but it's really nice that you noticed it and told me.
Cheers to you!
Cheers to you!
