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Cultivate Your Space
Scar tissue spirit
lest you cultivate
your space
run this race
through another's
place
forget your Alpha
scorn alacrity of
mind,body,vision
how will you breath
life
into another's
place
do your 360 degrees
of realisation and
suffer slings and
arrows
fed too your brain
and remain
Free
lest you cultivate
your space
run this race
through another's
place
forget your Alpha
scorn alacrity of
mind,body,vision
how will you breath
life
into another's
place
do your 360 degrees
of realisation and
suffer slings and
arrows
fed too your brain
and remain
Free
Published 4th Jan 2010
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5th Jan 2010 8:19am
I was kind of meandering along this one until the last word: free. The double space and it's loneliness...that caught. And that gave me pause.
I'm not sure why yet, but it did, and that's the important part.
I'm not sure why yet, but it did, and that's the important part.
7th Jan 2010 6:45pm
Thank you Annie,
The piece is basically about the isolation one can feel when not being true to yourself or to those around you.
So I achieved what I wanted. Thank you very much for your comments. Will check out your link to see some of your work.
Blessings.
The piece is basically about the isolation one can feel when not being true to yourself or to those around you.
So I achieved what I wanted. Thank you very much for your comments. Will check out your link to see some of your work.
Blessings.
