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Today... 12/4/2011

some roses are blue
just like my friends
their filled with hope
and their filled with beauty
just like my friends give me...
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Surprising how life changes.
It's Sucking less for me.
now i think. "suicide? what the hell is that?"
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I dedicate this to all My close friends. Chris Keahon, Maggie Brewer, Tyson Taylor, Aki, Cody Reece, Dylan Hutchins, Bailey Whittle, April Ball' Bram Swarr, and My favorite teacher Mrs. Templin!

Written by EmoRin

(Jon LeCroy)

Published 4th Dec 2011 | Edited 7th Dec 2011

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yo bro

2987Afrika

4th Dec 2011 10:33pm

1: sorry to inform you, but you mispelled beauty. otherwise: you did fantastic! You are an awesome bro! I know i don't always say this but i love you and you have potential. don't waste it!
"What makes me mad is when people who have potential waste it."
that is from Mr.follen.
peace out bro.

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EmoRin (Jon LeCroy)

4th Dec 2011 11:26pm

thanks sis. i guess.. lol. btw your Really good at poetry writing you know that?

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Beautiful

allybaby

5th Dec 2011 7:47am

This is beautifully written, its very clear the emotions you are trying to portray. As a writer that is a huge accomplishment so congratulations on achieving that because you did with me!

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EmoRin (Jon LeCroy)

7th Dec 2011 00:45am

thaks! :D i try my best to write. ^^

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Finally got to read it. :p

Maggie_Misery (Maggie.)

7th Dec 2011 2:39am

Hey, just wanted to say that i love this poem and yea, you better know that all of us will always have your back. Even the short freshman (: haha by the way, i told you so. (: